I would add in your Item chapter and skills sectionandat the begining of your sections. It will show the items you selected as your "core items" and your skills sequence. Also, in your Abilities chapter, the title is "Skills Sequences" but you only describe what the abilities do.

I really love your neutrality thought. You use your word in a way that the reader don't understand that he must be a pro to play him, but also that the champion isn't super OP. Only your intro was needed to prepare the Edge-apprentices.(modifié)
You also use very good exemple
"build a Duskblade of Draktharr for the damage, lethality, and the ability to be a walking control ward with its passive"
Love that xD
The over all tips seems really clear, but maybe the text seems a bit heavy when looking overall
This is a very great guide. Got my approval bro.