I'm not going to downvote now, because this guide is still a WIP. Howover, as devdevil said, your guide needs more sections and more explanation on the items, abilities, masteries and runes. Explain why you choose them over the most typical ones. Indeed, Laggermeister did say something true, your items are more expensive than others, and those items are out-of-the-ordinary as with the runes and masteries.

Also, use more BBCoding to make your guide appear more interesting, and also shorten up your paragraphs. No one likes to read long walls of text because they are usually boring and have not much useful information. Check out jhoijhoi's "Making s Guide" guide to learn more and improve on your guide!

If you finish your guide later, feel free to PM me, and I'll review it again and give more feedback.

Cheers!

-Accuzed

He just said it all

Nothing to say. Guide is complete garbage. Walls of text that no one will read, expensive questionably useful build, ****ty runes and masteries.

Might want to divide your items, skills, and fighting.
Add Pros/Cons, Runes, Masteries, and summoner spells.
Definitely walls of text.
No Enchantments?
Other than that, good.