You really should check out some of the guides devoted to coding here on Mobafire, they help tons ^^
I see you got the basic coding down, but you still need a solid format so it's easier to read.
Check out JhoiJhoi's guide to making a guide for starters :3
anyways, good work so far Reasonable items, a bit of strategy, what counters him is mentioned and laning+jungling is covered.
So far you deserve a +1 c:

Thanks for the comments and the help. I'm not used to setting up builds quite yet and was unaware of how to put in icons. Really appreciate it.

good build add an early spell vamp an it ill be k and u should remove the vote with a commentary, the most of ppl do not votes because of this

I max the abilities the same way. Nice build.

Its a good guide and I can see that the information you give us is usefull.
You only need more explanation and coding.

Coding isnt hard, its like this:

[[
+ Item/character/ability etc
+ ]]

or

[ + icon=Item/character/ability etc size=64 + ]

I will give you +1 cause I can see that you have something going here but you need to work at it. Follow my tips if you want but it will make the guide better.