"Check out my Xin zhao guide!"...OK


A relatively short guide. Cons, not so much, it seemed to me at first glance, but the guide is similar to the old guides 2-3 seasons (more like a 2 season) .If short, to assess, the guide 6 points out of 10.

Alright, lemme do the quick review you asked for (:

Cheat sheet:

- Too concise. There's no way you can build the same six items over and over again. Add defensive options.

- Add an upgraded trinket (preferrably Oracle's Lens) and Tier 3 boots.

Guide:

Too concise!
Try to either have a Jungle guide, or a top lane guide. Don't mix them up. If you want an all-round Xin Zhao guide, make sure it's not too confusing or just make separate guides.


Chapter order:

- Remove the "other roles" chapter and talk more about yourself & Xin Zhao in your intro.

- Next talk about Xin's pros & cons (gapcloser, high damage, CC... that kind of stuff.)

- Next introduce your Runes, Masteries & Summoner Spells. All in different chapters. In stead of writing, "just a standard...", add a picture of your masteries/rune page and talk about it deeper. WHY THOSE CHOICES?!

- Afterwards talk about your skills. Separate paragraphs, don't be afraid to write a lot.

- Then you can add the skill order + explanation (Possible question people might ask: "Xin scales with AD, why would you skill the ability scaling with AP first?" -> Try to reason about your choices to prevent those questions.) and possible combos.

- Following all of that you can start explaining gameplay. For jungling this should cover:

• Smiting
• Initial route
• Counterjungling
• Lane pressure
• Counterganking
• Rushing turrets
• Buff control
• Dragon control
• Baron control
• Warding

- Prologues are intros. Title should be "Conclusion".


Other:

- Use coding. I linked you the post with all of the coding guides in my previous comment.

- Ask yourself "Why do I do things this way while there are other possiblities?" -> Explain it to your audience.

- Language really is an issue. My advice is to write in Microsoft Word and use the spell-checker.

- There's a lot of newbies who check for guides. Keep that in mind. Explain things in a way everyone can understand it.

- Don't rush it. Don't publish unfinished guides. That's always a major mistake (I know how hard it is to not press that publish button :p).

Build:

Very, Very, Very offensive build. If you get CC'ed you're done with. Try to have different items against team comps with a lot of CC. Build MR if you're dealing with a superfed APC. Build Armor when dealing with a really fed AD champion.


Tip:

Take a look at a few of my guides to get some ideas. You'll understand that making guides requires a whole lotta work.


With a little more effort and dedication, you can definitely make a solid guide. I hope my advice will help you reach that goal (:

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Sorry for the spelling mistakes english isnt my mother tongue!Hope you liked the guide?:)