you claim to be a dps build, yet you have no dps items until the zeal for the phantom dancer. i really hope that those items are not listed in the order you get them in. i also hope that you mis-clicked when you got mana pots since your blue card gives you mana back from the bonus damage it does. also fail on runes. you did good by getting crit chance, but armor pen, mana regen, health, even attack speed runes might serve you better than crit damage. the only survival you have is stuff from your mastery.
for items i suggest the boots first, added AS and movement. if i randomly decide i want to make a bum rush for shoes i get the dagger first and a health pot. but recently began starting with a scepter so i get active health regen rather than passive like with a doran shield.
some good things about your build, you dont get a sword of the divine. thank you so much for not putting it in the build, but putting last whisper in. and phantom dancer is a good idea. but in your build you say to get because "it gives you the critical you want" i thought this was a dps build not a crit build.

Flaw in mastery. You cant get Strength of Spirit cuz u didnt get magic resistence. Also, try getting Wild Card later. Sure its good harassment, but Gold/Red card and stacked deck to that alot better. Also might want to throw in Blood Thirster and Malady for the Life steal. The life steal+ your dps will allow you to 1v1 just about anyone that doesn't have Stun/Blind using only auto attack.

I would agree my Tf build is squishy. It's meant to kill quicky before i die
if you guys wanna see it demonstrated just add me. and i'll play with you guys.

Stacked deck is really not good with my build because my build is meant to kill early
on so i can kill easier later.

Agreed, you have no survivability and no way to really advance the game. Yeah, dps fate is good, but is far too squishy not to think about surviving at all. I focus on the K/A, if you get a lot of assists, its not a bad thing, but honestly, with the AS from better builds, you can still reach your g-g-g-godlike.

The best way for a TF to farm early game is to upgrade stacked deck. It is much easier to last hit creeps saving your 4th hit as well as harassing.
Also, the build makes him dps, but there's no life steal as well as hp. One CC and your TF would die easily.

Its very counterproductive to go back and buy a pickaxe then sell for a BF Sword. You should really reconsider saving the pickaxe, seeing how it is required in Infinity Edges recipe.

I would not recommend this TF build.

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