Don't get me wrong; a lot of knowledge, references, ideas, and trains of thought is just fine. Preferred even. I'm just recommending a few ways to get them across a little easier.

Well I made the guide for players that want to look through it and read the whole thing, I share a lot of my knowledge on this character and if you just want the build it's fine. The only thing I suggest is to check that one comment I made about the boots if your just taking the boots. I do plan to add graphics such as items and skills maybe a screenshot or two. Like I said if your looking for just a build its fine but I made the guide for people that want to read the guide for thew tricks I label out for them.

Haven't voted yet because I'm not sure how I fell on the whole. Cudos to acknowledging that Garen isn't a tank though. With that said a few tidbits of criticisms to help out.

1. Wall of text crits you for 3k.
I understand the need to share a lot of information, but large paragraphs is not the way to do it. 9/10 readers won't even skim. Subcategories, labels, and color-coding similar or important pieces will make it an easier read. This also makes skimming easier, or quick referencing.

2. Display.
This touches on the wall of text again, but is less about the material and more about presentation. A graphic or two to break things up, a line-break to separate ideas, and the very common use of icons (for both abilities and items) are common ways to make the page look less wordy and more user friendly.

3. The build itself.
I like the Sword of the Occult idea, I've been meaning to try it. That said in my experience thing seem to run a little easier if I build a core damage item or two before touching defense. Could just be preference, but I don't feel squishy until mid-game+.

4. The build again, from a different view.
Though implied a dps build by your intro, this smells of an off-tank build. I'd recommend deciding which defensive item is least important and give it the heave-ho in lieu of something that hurts people.

Note: Apologies for the run-on sentences. I know they're there, but I can't be arsed to draft a comment. lol

Additional Note: My GOD it was hard to avoid a shameless self-promotion. lol

agree