Okay Rabadonssnapback I'm going to help you out logically. I will give you advice like the commentors who have helped me before on my Nautilus guide on my other account which I cant seem to access XD. I leave my advice to take up to you. I will not try to persuade you as it's your choice to take or ignore advice. But I have one question.

What is your purpose of making this guide?

Don't reply as it's rhetorical. The reason you wrote your guide is to advertise playing Nautilus and show why a player should choose him as a jungler. I believe what we (the commentors) are trying to do is help you make a guide that works and won't confuse new players.

So without further ado I will try to help you make a better guide.

Runes:

As said by others they are less then desired. Ability power glyphs seem like a good idea but Naut's AP ratio isn't that strong making it less desirable of a choice. I recommend
Flat Magic Resist Glyphs as they help Nautilus with Magic resist due to the lack of decent tank based magic resist (RIP force of nature).

The random quint of Armor, lose it for either Attack speed Quints (which you have 2) or go movement speed quints.

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Masteries: It doesn't make sense to build Nautilus attack oriented as his statistics make him tanky. By having most of your point in the red category you lack movement speed that allows for more ganks!!

In general you need to EXPLAIN why you chose each mastery. As it's crucial to show it.

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General things to consider

item explanation. You need to explain why as its crucial to make the right build.

Ability explanation: how can a player know what a Dredge Line is if you don't have an explanation for it. If you keep your guide as is there will be no reference to Riptide. An essential part of ganking.

Jungling: it's a decent section but you lack anything about Counter jungling which is very important as Naut's greatest opponent according to Champion select is Shyvanna who is, IMO the best counter jungler.

BBC coding: try to get some pictures in and make it more appealing. It takes time but it really improves a guide.

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change runes: take a look at other guides they have good ideas.

Show items and abilities

And don't try to take some peoples criticism so heavily. I understand as there are some people on Moba who can be a nuisance and unhelpful but others are genuine in their comments IE: Veng LMFAO (who wrote quite a bit to help you) while others will show no mercy IE: (Laggermeister). I hope it's okay to use these examples If you have a concern about it I would be more than happy to remove it.

Hope this long winded and hour long comment (the time it took me to compose this) helps.

-AngryOldman aka KingPudding

Said the Gold to the Plat.

I'm also downvoting for your masteries and runes. I've seen the opinion of Diamond players who have other rune/mastery set-ups and they make much more sense then what you have. Also, your attitude kinda sucks.

Said the Silver to the Gold.

Seriously bronze 3 dude talking. First of all get outta there, then come back. ily <3

Dude I've played enough tanky junglers back in S2 to know that this **** doesn't work when you start facing some competent enemies.

Dem Runes ...... -1

Haters gonna hate :) for me it works ok? i am sorry for wasitng your time

Anyway, 21 offense is really ****. And so are AP runes.

Might want to verify your acc

Who's the ignorant one now eh? -1

I am sorry! It's just my very first guide here on Mobafire...Also some (most) of the BBcodes don't work...don't know why...

thanks for your advice I really appreciate that!

I would highly advise not calling Vyn ignorant. He provides some of the best constructive criticism around and you'd be dumb to ignore that.
He has a point. The runes and masteries look offputting. Telling somebody to "try it first" isn't a response to it either. The whole point of the guide is to convince me to use it JUST by reading it. I don't want to have to "test" it before I think about using the guide as a staple, it needs to be a guaranteed.

The guide seems very.. bland?
It needs more visual work. Eg BBCoding and using images.
Because your runes and masteries are very diverse and... unusual? You need to explain them in great depth. The explanation you have provided doesn't cut it for me, and has not convinced me to use them.

I'd suggest putting up a picture of the mastery tree.

Item section is horrid.
Explain each and EVERY item in-depth and why you take the item. Explain how they benefit you in terms of the stages of the game.
You need to also explain / have more items available for picking. You only recommend buying 9 items EVER. For a champion like Nautilus that sounds inaccurate. Ever recommending other boots is a good start. Eg Boots of Swiftness can be a viable alternative against a slow-heavy team.

Jungling section seems fine.
ONLY USE YOUR Dredge Line if the enemy attempts to run away / uses Flash.
- Very good point, nice work!

Teamfighting needs a huge amount of expanding on.
How could Dredge Line be used? What is the importance of protecting your ADC? What is the important of being a zoning menace for the enemy ADC? Etc.

Also, you need to add in a summary chapter. It's a nice way to close off the guide neatly, without having an abrupt end like you have (:

So yeah, that's my small review. Just expand on the guide, fix some grammatical errors / spell check it and make it more pleasing to the eye. Don't forget to expand on everything you say and put in a summary chapter!

Have a good day, goodluck! <3

Really nice guide, i started playing him a few days ago and didnt know anything about this champ.
Then I saw this guide and now i always carry my team...
The Runes look a bit strange but its working very well :)