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-Try to make your Items section look like less of a wall. Make use headings and larger icons:
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Also you should probably enable require comment to vote as I see you seem to have gotten trollvoted by someone. It happens to all of us...
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I think that you can just change a litel thing you do some AP and because of that i advise you to replace the Trinity Force for a linch bane.
In you guide you can also ad some alternative items because with jax a lot of items work nice with him.
But still +1
Another problem is that you stick to very little colors, and only basic coding. You should try out icon coding, columns, and so on. There are guides on this site for that reason only. You have paragraphs of text that explain very briefly and in a 'wall of text' format which makes it unappealing.
Your build and mastery trees are rather strange. The build is expensive, and just buys the MOST expensive items in the game, which is a tough thing to do. You also lack health and proper resists, apart from your ultimate.
Your guide lacks alternative items, tricks with skills, and all those small details that REALLY explodes a guide up to popular taste.
Also, Hybrid guides are tough mainly for the reason that there are many players who prefer either AD or AP. Using a very definitive combo such as a deathcap and an infinity edge, than throwing in a rageblade creates a very 'unsure' build order. A deathcap by itself is pointless as you have little AP and you aren't getting any strong effects. You pay quite a bit for it with very little results. On the other hand, buying something like a Rylai's, Void Staff, Abyssal Sceptor, Zhonyas and so on all effects and AP.
I'll not vote, mainly because I believe it can be improved.