It isn't a General Guide, but a Champion Guide. Put this guide in the general ones only brings confusion. Also your guide can get more visibility if you put it in the right section.

Why Manamune lol?

Nice build dude!!

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Terrible skill sequence. -1

Well it's fixed now :/

Hey guys if you happen to have any good games you might do with any of my builds, feel free to send me the videos/pictures and I'll present them on here for everyone to see with all rights to you! Also if you have any items/builds/ideas you want me to try and record, go ahead and say it on here/PM me, I'll try to improve this and show more good builds when I come across them. Thanks

He doesn't?

Why summoner's wrath if you don't even take ignite?

Thanks for the input you guys. I also just realized my mistake on the Ultimate damage type, thanks for that. I will be working hard all this weekend and throughout next week fixing this guide, making more builds as I try them out, and put out some more videos. Thanks

Just a note, jinx's Rocket (ultimate), does physical damage, NOT magic.

Well I have likes and dislikes about your guide. I'll start off with the good.

You have a video, which is fantastic. Regardless if it's your first game or not, it's nice to have something your viewers can see and brake down for themselves. The build itself is alright, no complaints. I do feel muramana should be optional, but it is definitely a way to build on here if you want to fishbone all day. Also the guide has a lot of information which is also good.

Now for the bad.

The guide is sooooo hard to read haha. It's all just one big essay and hurts to read. Put some color and some flash in there. It's not just to make it look pretty, it's to make it easier on the eyes when reading.

As for the video itself. It was nice you talked in it, but it was a bit of a laggy video and you sounded bored or tired. Which is often a mistake I make myself in videos. Make sure to keep it in your mind to be loud and outgoing and fun to grab viewers, but I am no one to talk because my videos can be up and down haha. For LoL its hard for me to talk and play, so I record it, then add audio later so I am free to think. Also I can help you make a smoother video if you want.


All and all it's not a bad guide, just need a little touch up. Also I've learn that you should never post a WIP. People can't stand it, wait till it's a finished guide before posting. For mine, I 100% finish the chapters I needed. Then I will add more one at a time, each one being posted when 100% finshed. Well good luck and hope this helps!