Thanks for the feedback,

Keep in mind this is for a TAFE assignment and will be read by someone that has never played LoL before.

This guide does lack a lot of depth, but the objective is creating a form of user documentation.

Also I have found it very hard to post my own images without having to first upload them somewhere else!

but yes I understand this guide lacks lots of things, and your feedback is greatly appreciated.

Based on this, I don't think I will be updating the guide as it seems like a lot of work when there are already better Graves guides out there.

To start you have extra quints and glyphs on your cheat sheet. You may wnt to put your abilities into one section. Never put champ lore, no one ever reads it, and it's a huge useless wall of text. You say your goanna teach us positioning of graves, but then put a map with nothing on it. That doesn't help at all. And never mention recomended items, this is your build not Riots.