Some things to think about.

First, turn on comments to vote, or people will just troll your guide. Nobody wants that.

Second, the biggest problem with this guide is that it has way too much background info. If readers want to know sneak peaks, or what she says in game and stuff, there's always a wiki page for that. You are writing a guide; try to include as much of your own info as you can.

What stuff actually is yours is good. The tips and explanations about the technical aspects of her abilities are useful even for people who are fairly familiar with her. Emphasize that section, as it is easily the best part of the guide.

Skill order: Because she is such a cd dependent champ, I always max her E before her Q. Both get ad ratios, but Broken Wings does not have a decreased cd, while your shield does. Because she's a melee bruiser, she needs that shield to stay alive in fights so that she can deal the damage that she naturally has. Oh, and I'm sure you meant to fix this, but she levels her ult at lv.16, not 15.

I really like the item build though, if you can fix some of the above, I'll be happy to upvote it.

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