I have to agree with GreenFrogs there, the guide could really shine if you'd put some effort to it, but it is great so far in my opinion. I just loved to stand still and, since I have Brolaf, spam JUG JUG JUG JUG hehe it's hilarious.

Tested out, speed on jungle works really great and clear time is really awesome, I could make a video for you to post on the guide if you wish to do so, I love Olaf and I got the patience to help out anyone<3

Bahahaha the name.. Dude the name of your guide. +1 for that. You do need to add more though and make it more appealing. It looks really bland.

Well I took a look at your guide and I thought I might give you some feedback.
First of all I'm not a big fan of Items like Spirit Visage or Shurelya's Battlesong on Olaf. Same thing for the Ionian Boots of Lucidity. I think you rather need Tankyness on Olaf than Cooldown Reduction. But that I don't like these Items doesn't mean they don't work so that's something I can accept.
Contentwise theres nothing wrong with your guide but I think you could improve the appearance. I mean use more BBCodes to make it look nice and easier to read, add some pictures or videos and all that.
I upvoted because it's overall a good guide and maybe I'll see some change too soon. :D