You realize I also explain my items in the item spot below.I also like having the 3 bonus ad since it's more reliable than crit.Also what if the entire team is like tryndamere,udyr,riven,vi,zilean what is the wall gonna do for you there nothing.

-PURCHASE ORDER PURCHASE ORDER PURCHASE ORDER PURCHASE ORDER... its preety annoying and it doest explain very much you know :P

-I recommend you 3 Greater Mark of Critical Chance, so you get 100% Crit chance with Statikk Shiv and Infinity Edge.

-BBCoding please, read jhoijhoi's guide for making a guide (here)

-Your item section cant be more wrong. Sorry, its impossible to read and you dont tell your stuff clearly enough. Also, you cant put that much stuff in notes, it looks very bad and it seems like a explanation for your items (they're supposed to be JUST notes).

- Sorry but Wind Wall is one of the greatest one-point-wonder in the game. What if a Amumu suddenly ganks you and you don't have your W to dodge his Bandage Toss. GG First blood to that Kassadin on the enemy team (just an example, you know my point).

-Get C2V if you haven't yet.

Hope your guide improves :)
Send me a PM if it does and you want me to check your guide again (I may reconsider voting :D)

Cheers

Thanks so much for your help I appreciate it

Hmm, you have absoultely no codes in your guide and your item build is all messed up, but its ok I guess since its your first time and I recommend you to look over at some guides that will help you make better guides like Making a Guide. But its all ok, just watch it and change your guide