First Render Image!

[quote=Leonidas_Sama]This is my first rendered picture I did ever. I just want some constructive feedback on how I did and how good it looks ^_^ [img=http://i1221.photobucket.com/albums/dd478/CrunkMonkey/LeonaRenderImage_zpsf182b422.png][/quote]

[quote=F3ar0ner]I don't know much about this stuff, but I think you did a very nice job[/quote]

[quote=Leonidas_Sama][quote=F3ar0ner] I don't know much about this stuff, but I think you did a very nice job [/quote] Thanks! :D, I appreciate it[/quote]

[quote=WOMBO]your hair is messed up bro, everything else is fine (tbh not that hard though) sonicgal has a render tutorial for hair, dunno if I can find it[/quote]

[quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Looks fine to me.[/quote]

[quote=Leonidas_Sama][quote=WOMBO] your hair is messed up bro, everything else is fine (tbh not that hard though) sonicgal has a render tutorial for hair, dunno if I can find it [/quote] The hair was hard for me to do :/. Couldn't get it to look right at all but oh well time will make me better ^^. And please don't call me bro since I don't know you like that, Thanks ^_^ [quote=-NA- Veng Lmfao]Looks fine to me.[/quote] Thank you :D[/quote]

[quote=Mowen]A lot of it looks chunky and messy in places, what did you use to do this? You should really use the pen tool if you are not. It will let you get smooth and accurate lines.[/quote]

[quote=Hogopogo]Yea i usually use the pen tool but It's very annoying.[/quote]

[quote=Leonidas_Sama][quote=Mowen] A lot of it looks chunky and messy in places, what did you use to do this? You should really use the pen tool if you are not. It will let you get smooth and accurate lines. [/quote] I did use the pen tool but it was my first so I was messing up[/quote]

[quote=Mowen]Well my advice would be to lean towards going inside the line you want (the outline of the character) rather than towards the outside. When there's extra stuff on the outside of the character it's very obvious, but usually not as obvious that there's a bit missing. Try to use long smooth lines when you can. Most curves can be done with just 1 line. Zoom in pretty far so you can see the pixels your line is landing on and aim for the inside.[/quote]