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Senior Shirt Design

Creator: Nyoike December 26, 2011 9:16pm
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Yeah, tried something like that, my first idea for it didn't turn out all that well, but that looks pretty cool, I'd have to monkey with it some more to see.
To be updated soon!
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I think you need to make it flow a lot more, and blend into the t shirt, right now it looks like it's just been stuck on. That's really all I can say, I don't know much about this stuff.
Thanks to Koksei, The_Nameless_Bard,JhoiJhoi, LaCorpse, JEFFY40HANDS and myself for the signatures! I am also a certified gangster.
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tsk tsk.. here

Or just give me the psd tomorrow.. And I got ur back :D
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Im not really a big stickler for the font itself. If you could blend it in with the background more, instead of being completely solid up against it.

P.S. Is your school mascot an eagle, hawk, falcon?

I would like to mess around with your idea a little.

Thank you WrathWaffleWarrior, spooon, L1LShadow, JEFFY40HANDS, jhoijhoi and palzm for the sigs :3
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CnC doesn't mean stick your nose in and **** with it Ramen tsk tsk.
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screwblum wrote:

Im not really a big stickler for the font itself. If you could blend it in with the background more, instead of being completely solid up against it.

P.S. Is your school mascot an eagle, hawk, falcon?

I would like to mess around with your idea a little.


It's an eagle.



CnC doesn't mean stick your nose in and **** with it Ramen tsk tsk.


Agreed


And to everyone, we decided to try something a bit different:

Once again, still feel it needs a little something extra.
Any ideas?
To be updated soon!
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The text feels out of place and awkward to me. As well the font is underwhelming. Granted Text isn't my strong suit.

I'd either frame the mascot by putting your type above and below the image as half circles. Does that make sense?

Or outside of the wings still following their curve (underneath the wing span). Inside the negative space of the wings just makes it too distracting for me and doesn't allow the shape or meaning of the words to come across unmolested. It just looks out of place.

I like the design that was chosen, miss the background somewhat but it keeps the image simple.

However what type of print process are you going with? If the image is going to be raised (as in you can feel it with your hands) or is it going to be flush with the shirt? Because that will dictate how much cleaning up you'll have to do.

Overall I like what you've got going. As long as you're pleased with the end result that is all that matters. ^_^
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The glow that you put on it might not show up on a t shirt but that looks pretty awesome.

Thanks for the amazing sigs Brynolf,JEFFY40HANDS, Katoki, and myself
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"
What I want help with most is text.
What should I do with it!?
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He didnt ask for cnc, I helped him visually, not with text.
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"Center the text more and try using a different color"

accomplishes the same idea without you going in and doing it for him.

Sure you used a visual explanation, but it defeats the purpose of him creating it himself...Just my 2 cents.

But what do I know, I'm just a nub and Ramen The Great is 2gud.

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