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Icuonuez Will Review Your Guide!

Creator: Icuonuez November 8, 2011 10:27pm
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Terms and Conditions:
  • Must be at least Summoner Level 20
  • Must be readable (Spellcheck, if you please)
  • You must have already read JhoiJhoi's Making a Guide
  • You must be remotely active (At least 80 post count)
  • Champion(s) must be at least one month old (I will only review your guide if its champion was released at least a month prior to the request)

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Champions I don't know how to play:

Why you want me to review your guide: Of course there are the simplest reasons. If you don't have any comments, or you need some feedback on improvement. My judgement is not biased. Whatever quarrel I have with you will remain outside my review. In order for me to review your guide, I'll need it in this format:
Guide Link -
Summoner Level -
Review Because -
Vote - Yes/No

And that's it! Throw your guide my way, and I'll take a look at it the moment it is posted on this thread. Alternatively, you can send me a message with all the above information. Ciao!

Note: I will not review every cheat sheet in your guide. If you submit a guide with multiple builds, I will only review the first one.


Special thanks to Keondre for the sig!

Due to inactivity, I am no longer reviewing guides. Sorry guys :(
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Reserved for Reviewed Guides.


1. Kazega's "Syvana: Shadow of the Dragon"

My Review: The guide, in itself, could use some work. However, I love your use of coding, and the guide is very explanatory in some areas. Giving the other areas more flavor will help to make this guide optimal. I'm not going to vote, not because I feel it doesn't deserve it, but because I feel you could make this guide a little better. Right now, I'm on your side of the fence. Give me a response in my thread or message me, and I'll upvote if you don't feel like updating it.
REANALYSIS:The guide looks much better. I would color all the pros green and all the cons red, as it looks more appealing in general. I also see you've added more color. It is now much easier to read. Add in a Patch Notes section, and you're good to go! +1 from me.


2. Pozsich's "Tryndamere, the King"

My Review: Overall, the guide was great. There are a few things I don't agree with here and there, but everyone has different opinions. This is easily one of the best Tryndamere guides on MOBAFire! +1


3. Phate83's "Shyvana Tanky DPS Monster *Ranked Jungle*

My Review: The guide in itself is lacking format, filled only with icons for items and champions. Have you read JhoiJhoi's Making a Guide? It gives all the information about formatting you'll ever need. This is the real problem, and the reason I downvoted. If you format your guide, I'll definitely change my vote. What I really look for is Centering, Columns, and a bit of color. For example, Shyvana's armor is red, so when I icon for shyvana, I make her name color red so that it synergizes well with the icon.


4. RosePhoenix's "Fednekton - Interior Crocodile Alligator"

My Review: I can't find anything wrong with your guide. I'm sorry I can't be more productive, but you've written it so well. This deserves to be in the top 3 Renekton guides, for certain.

5. RosePhoenix's "Fedturne - Nightmare in the Jungle {UPDATE}"

My Review: I, by far, like the formatting of your Renekton build more than this one. I will not vote on this guide, as I neither like or dislike it.


Kazega's "Katarina: Playing with Knives"

My Review: Overall, I like the guide. Very nice formatting, and a nice amount of color. I also like the way you have random Katarina pictures scrambled through the guide. It's not symmetrical, but it's unique, and it gives me a nostalgic feeling while I read through the guide. Definitely a +1 from me.


Marisi's "Make em Go Nocturne is OP Riot Should Nerf Him"

My Review: In short, be more explanatory. Work on your formatting and color. Give more information on how to play Nocturne. I hope you found my review helpful. If I see improvement, I will reread and change my vote. Good Luck!


Beeswarm17's "Riven - Valor for All"

My Review: First, I would like to say that your guide is excellent. The formatting is nice, the guide is very explanatory. Your Introduction and Jungling sections could (in my opinion) be centered, but if you feel it looks fine the way it is, that's good. How do you feel about Trinity Force on Riven? I know many people don't prefer it, but I find the damage I deal with Sheen and Broken Wings to be very effective when split-striking. Very good guide overall. Didn't find any real problems with it.


Calibern's "Xin Zhao, the Bane of Squishies"

My Review: Your items are very well explained, and you make great use of item coding. Even without much color, the guide still retains a very formal appearance. I see a few minor problems, and those have been laid before you. What you do with them is completely up to you. Very impressive guide.


Shadownet's "Carry Me Morde"

My Review: You make great use of formatting. The way you've placed your images is very pleasing, and your guide has nice amount of color without going completely overboard. I will refrain from voting, simply because I want to have a clear understanding of how your build works. The next time Morde hits freeweek, I'll make me vote.



Kusoku's "Katarina Du Couteau - The Sinister Blade"

My Review: To be honest, I don't see much wrong with the guide. Poor Grammar and Spelling is the only thing I can really suggest changing. The guide is very nicely formatted and informative. Great job.



Fictionized's "Shyvana - Jungling and Solo Drakes"

My Review: Awesome formatting, plenty of explanation, and nice use of images. I didn't find you being repetitive as much as reiterating your statements. I feel it gets the point across. The one thing you need to do is update your cheat-sheet for the people who just want a build to follow when trying Shyvana for the first time. Those people don't have time to read your entire guide, so they need something quick and easy to follow.


Special thanks to Keondre for the sig!

Due to inactivity, I am no longer reviewing guides. Sorry guys :(
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Great initiative! And good luck :)
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jhoijhoi wrote:

Great initiative! And good luck :)

Ty, JhoiJhoi! Just trying to do my part for the community.


Special thanks to Keondre for the sig!

Due to inactivity, I am no longer reviewing guides. Sorry guys :(
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I would suggest instead of listing the champions you don't own, list the ones you *do* own? I'm surprised no one has requested a review yet :/
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I understand you haven't played Shyv yet which is why I'm going to post u this request

Guide Link -Syvana: Shadow of the Dragon
Summoner Level - 30
Review Because - Since you haven't played Shyvana: I was wondering if after reading this guide you would feel comfortable playing her.
Vote - Yes: if you feel it deserves it

Also: FIRST!! and on a serious note can I make multiple Requests in a single post?
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Kazega: I will get to reviewing your guide soon. And yes! You can post more than one guide for review.

JhoiJhoi: I don't know why I didn't just do that.. I'm missing alot of champions so it would've been easier for me. I'll get to work on it asap. Thanks for the help.


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Due to inactivity, I am no longer reviewing guides. Sorry guys :(
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Yeah the guide is a work in progress and I do plan on updating it overtime. I like Entropy. It works great on some champions, and I am sure Shyvana can use it well, but I feel Frozen Mallet and Trinity Force work better on Shyvana because they work better with Burnout and her passive.

Thanks for the comments and I will get back to you with an update
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Guide Link - Here it is.
Summoner Level - 30
Review Because - Hoping for an opinion and chance to improve of course.
Vote - Yes! I want you to take this seriously, if you don't need to vote it isn't as.
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I do not currently have 80 posts because I am still new to these forums, but am working on becoming more active.

Guide Link - http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shyvana-tanky-dps-monster-ranked-jungle-147654
Summoner Level - 30
Review Because - Shyvana is extremely fun, and if you haven't used her yet, you have to try her.
Vote - Yes
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