Pallis123's Review Shop

[quote=Pallis123]Hello Mobafire! Lately I've come to like this site more and more, and I even find myself skipping League games right now just to be browsing through this site. I enjoy theorycrafting, and therefore like writing guides as well as reviewing them. I've occasionally commented on guides that I thought had a good start, but could use more improvement, and I thought I would open a review shop because I really loved it. Without furder ado, I present to you: Pallis123's Review Shop! [color=red][size=5]Requirements[/size][/color] Before I will review your guide, I must be sure it meets a few requirements. Reviewing guides with a very bad start and nearly no good points of course doesn't work. [list][*]Your guide must have some kinds of coding in it, as to make it easier to read. You can have a look at Jhoijhoi's Getting Started guide for some awesome templates and expalanations; [*]Your guide must be serious. No problem if it is non-meta - exactly the opposite, I love unconventional picks - but it musn't be a troll guide or something; [*]Make sure your guide is understandable. I don't ask for perfect English, but people must be able to get your point and not just think "wtf is this guy actually trying to tell me?"; [*]Your review must be according to my review template so it is easier for me to find your guide and know what you want[/list] [color=red][size=5]Types of reviews[/size][/color] I have two different types of reviews. [list][*]One based on your guide (coding / viability), where I will read the guide and write down mistakes and things you've done well, from a theorycrafting point of view. I will also give your guide a mark somewhere between 1 and 10, giving points for viability, readability, structure and cheat sheet. After having done that, [s]I will go into the game and test your build out, once again putting down notes. I will then once again give your guide a mark, and vote based on that[/s] I will only test your build if I own the champion, otherwise I will vote based on the theorycrafting review! [*]The other a review of your English, in which I will just copy-paste your guide into Word and rewrite it in my own words. Using good English in your guide really improves the pleasure of users reading it, so it is really important[/list] [color=red][size=5]Template[/size][/color] [b]Username:[/b] [Pallis123] [b]Guide:[/b] [link] [b]What type of review:[/b] [Guide content / English / Both] [color=red][size=5]Reviews done[/size][/color] [table][tr][td width=200][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/season-4-a-guide-to-irelia-top-lane-359849]Irelia[/url][/td][td width=10][/td][td]Emoriam[/td][td width=10][/td][td][color=green]8.5 / Upvote[/color][/td][/tr] [tr][td][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/living-is-highly-overrated-a-guide-to-top-lane-mordekaiser-387862]Mordekaiser[/url][/td][td][/td][td]Electro522[/td][td][/td][td][color=green]7.5 / Upvote[/color][/td][/tr] [tr][td][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malcolm-graves-settling-the-score-391260]Graves[/url][/td][td][/td][td]Foxy Riven[/td][td][/td][td][color=green]8 / Upvote[/color][/td][/tr][/table] Well, that concludes it for now, let the reviews flow in! :D[/quote]

[quote=emoriam]My dear Lord your first review! Username: emoriam Guide: In my signature! What type of review: Guide content Thanks in advance fellow summoner![/quote]

[quote=Pallis123]Will do the review tomorrow, with the in-game review coming a little later because I dont own Irelia yet. Was planning on buying her soon though. :^)[/quote]

[quote=Electro522]Why not? Ill ask for one. Name: Electro522 Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/living-is-highly-overrated-a-guide-to-top-lane-mordekaiser-387862 Review: Is it possible to get both reviews for one quide? I also run a review shop, but havent been able to do any reviews due to work and me currently in the process of making a Hecarim guide.[/quote]

[quote=Foxy Riven]Well if you got time on your hands... :D Username: Foxy Riven Guide: [color=#B80000][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malcolm-graves-settling-the-score-391260]Malcolm Graves - Settling the Score[/url][/color] What type of review: Both Thanks in advance! Edit: O ye, +rep for opening a review shop & best of luck to you (:[/quote]

[quote=Pallis123]Oh damn, all these champions I dont own :'D Should probably add a note that I will test them out if I own the champion / am planning on buying it / it is free. I will do the guide and English reviews now, and add all the champs to the list of must-play, while using your guides at the first time. :)[/quote]

[quote=TROLLing1999]Username: TROLLing1999 Guide: In my signature Type of Review: Both Thanks in advance![/quote]

[quote=banji]Username: banjii Guide: In my Signature or [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/in-depth-ahri-guide-hit-charm-keep-calm-331330]HERE[/url] Type of Review: Both[/quote]

[quote=Pallis123]I excuse myself to everyone who has asked for a review and has not gotten it yet! I'm currently on holiday, and however I day play League sometimes, I can't really set myself to doing the reviews. I will try do it is as soon as possible![/quote]

[quote=tasteslikepuddin]Hello I was wondering if I could get my guide reviewed. Username: tasteslikepuddin Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/bite-to-fight-a-guide-to-top-lane-volibear-s4-388833 Review type: both please. It's a [[Volibear]] top lane guide. I would like to get both forms of review. A word of warning though I used word a little while ago to spell check my guide and it totaled to around 45 pages. So it's up to you if you wan't to try and go for the whole thin.[/quote]