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Revamping my review service!

Creator: Vynertje September 4, 2013 10:33pm
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Could you take a look at my Katarina guide? :)

Edit: may I ask you to refrain from reviewing my guide a little longer? I'm still doing some changes and am iplementing tables, so I'd like to get a little more time for that and have you see it when it's done. :P

My Taric guide
- Thanks Emikadon for the beautiful signature! :D
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Hey you recently posted a question on my Thresh guide, and I would really appreciate it if you did a full review as well =) I'm new to the guide making scene and any criticism/tips will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!!

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-thresh-nobody-escapes-the-chain-warden-390476
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Hey you recently posted a question on my Thresh guide, and I would really appreciate it if you did a full review as well =) I'm new to the guide making scene and any criticism/tips will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!!

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/s4-thresh-nobody-escapes-the-chain-warden-390476


I'll get to it later today
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Hey, I'd highly appreciate a review of my guide The Essentials.

It's already been scouted and has gotten plenty of exposure (and is lengthy), so if you are short on time or it simply isn't your cup of tea, please feel free to decline.

Every few weeks I seem to find something significant to improve, so I think it would really benefit from a close outside look. My biggest concerns are:
  • Formatting
  • Guide length and information that can be cut, condensed, or clarified
  • Information that needs to be included
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I appreciate you stopping by my Sejuani guide, I would say i'm relatively new-ish so any advice you might have for anything else you can see that's wrong in there would be very much appreciated.

I apologize for any rudimentary mistakes you might find, but i'm always willing to listen, and anything new I might learn is something all of my friends will learn too.

Thanks again!

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/thatll-do-pig-an-in-depth-jungle-sejuani-guide-4-11-390932
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Hey Vynertje, was wondering if you can review my new Rengar guide. When reviewing I was wondering if you can include some things you would like to see, maybe parts where i should go into more detail, you know, stuff like that.

link: Here ya go
If you found me helpful give me some +Rep :)
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Hi Vyn! ^_^ If you ever get the chance, could you stop by my Katarina guide and leave a review? Here's the link.
Thanks to XeresAce for the sig!
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I'll get to both requests this weekend, just not sure when exactly because I'm broken after my graduation party yesterday night.
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Hey Vynertje, could you do a review for my guide on Maokai? It recently hit top rated for the champion and I want to know your opinion on it. If you could consider giving it a scout point (if you reaaaaaaaaaally like it) and rate it from 1-10 that would be amazing. Thank you!

My build

<3 HAPPY GANKING <3


credit for the signature goes to Emikadon!
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Hello mate, would you mind reviewing my Jarvan IV guide as well? Quite new to the whole "guide-making" thing!

Thanks in advance! ;)

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