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Reviews R'US: Will read your guide! (Round 1,...

Creator: Nighthawk September 1, 2011 5:20pm
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Guide For (champion): Talon
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: New to guide making, would like to reach #1 guide if possible (i have faith in it).
What I'd like you to focus on: Formatting and appeal to average players
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/talon-assassin-extraordinaire-129230
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Guide For : Veigar.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: this is my first guide, so I probably made common mistakes.
What I'd like you to focus on: the overall guide.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-no-nonsense-guide-to-veigar-131360
Check out my Veigar guide. CLICK HERE
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Guide For:
Annie
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:
I spent a lot of time making this guide and I feel it is something really good, however since I don't have any experience with making guide's I'd like a 'professional' opinion on my guide.
What I'd like you to focus on:
Item section, rune section and how coherent it is. Also use of language, English is not my native language and even though I spent a lot of time spell-checking and just reading through my guide I'd like to know if there are any glaring mistakes I left.
Guide Link:
Clicky!
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Guide For (champion): Cassiopeia
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Because it's an exotic build about jungling with her. I'm happy about some feedback.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that is important for you as I want a honest review.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/a-snakes-jungle-jungling-guide-for-cassiopeia-130529?page=1
Please notice: If you just commented my post or updated your guide please let me know - by writing an PN - to get new feedback / a new vote. I can't have an eye on all the guides I'm commenting.
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Guide for: Katarina
Reason for Review: To see if you like it
What I want Focused; Do I convey my theories, thoughts and ideas in a good manner?
Link; Katarina: playing with knives

Thanks for doing this +rep even if you don't review my guide ^-^
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Guide For (champion): Tryndamere
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's my first build, I put a lot of work in but it seems to have very few views so far.
What I'd like you to focus on: 2 things please, is the formatting OK, and do you think my masteries and runes on the jungle one go well together?
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/tryndamere-the-king-132991
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Guide For (champion): Garen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's for Dominion, and I believe Garen needs a real dominion guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: It's my first guide, so everything. I guess tell me what you'd like to see more of
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-tanky-dominion-justice-133356

Check out my Garen guide for Dominion.
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Review for " Riven- Things Get Comprehensive At Twisted Treeline"
Why I'd liked to be reviewed: Put about 40h of my lifetime into this;
Please focus on: Content, layout and grammar (as I am no native speaker)
click me to read and review :)

Thank you very much in advance as every feedback helps me to improve and I appreciate for the effort and time you put into this.
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Guide For (champion): Nidalee
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: because it, and I've put lots of effort into it and its my first one...
What I'd like you to focus on: the guide and its current info, I am still adding more
Guide Link: I left my link somewhere around here...
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My guide is for:Hybrid Warwick
Reason:This is my first guide and I could really use some help on what to fix
Focus:I would like you to focus some everything such as the neatness,creativity,helpfulness things like that.
Link:Click on the image or http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/warick-furry-devisation-hybrid-lanewick-a-new-way-to-ww-134686#lastcomment

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