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What's wrong with my build?

Creator: Ordovicia September 12, 2011 11:56am
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I want to make a build that is helpful and easy to use to benefit this community -- apparently that isn't the case with my recent effort.

Could you be so kind as to review my build and comment?
What did I do wrong?
What are things I should add, and what are some I should avoid?
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This is probably the nicest case of advertising I've seen.

Advertising is not allowed though, I'm afraid.

But here's a good guide on guide making. And here's a few simple dos and don'ts.

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Thank you!!
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Ur build is archived but I still will make some comments.

U don't build Madred's Razors to Wriggle's Lantern? I reccomend u do because it increases ur jungle speed, dmg and survivabilty a bit. But most important u have free wards every 3 min! And that only for 600 extra gold. U should build Madred's Razors to Wriggle's Lantern.

And ur runes simply just suck. try build full crit or armor pen marks, full armor or crit seals, full attkspeed or crit glyphs, and armor pen or crit quints.

To clearify: u got this as runes
3 Greater Mark of Scaling Magic Resist, 3 Greater Mark of Armor, 3 Greater Mark of Cooldown Reduction
3 Greater Seal of Defense, 3 Greater Seal of Scaling Magic Resist, 3 Greater Seal of Critical Damage
3 Greater Glyph of Scaling Magic Resist, 3 Greater Glyph of Critical Damage, 3 Greater Glyph of Vigor
1 Greater Quintessence of Defense, 1 Greater Quintessence of Scaling Magic Resist and 1 Greater Quintessence of Armor



I would max Spinning Slash last but that is all ur choice, would be unfair to tell u to max it last.




And ur build isn't very attractive. Try to add some icons and coloured texts, or maybe even some pictures. Check this build how to.
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While the guy above doesn't know much about runes, the runes he mentions are still better than yours.
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For Tryndamere i would normally get Greater Mark of Attack Speed, Greater Seal of Armor, Greater Glyph of Cooldown Reduction(maybe Greater Glyph of Attack Speed, even stonewall use them) and greater quintessence of desolation.
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For jungle Tryndamere, I'd recommend the runes 'NicknameMy' posted, or Greater Mark of Desolation. I find Greater Glyph of Attack Speed > Greater Glyph of Cooldown Reduction. You can also get Greater Seal of Attack Speed to speed up the jungle. I personally don't jungle with Trynd since his rework. I find RIOT made him too unreliable with the changes they put in place. His jungle phase damage can be incredibly random.

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@sears, Srry I know the runes I mentioned aren't the greatest but I almost never play tryn
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