Thread for all the poetry/ song writers in the...

[quote=MyRepublic]If this isn't the right spot for this then please move it wherever, but I just wanted to make a thread where you can anonymously post your lyrics and get some feedback without feeling stupid for posting things that mean something to you. Not to be a hypocrite I'll start us off with my own spoken word poem that I want to present at my school soon. I don't want any "this sucks" "BAD." or "gay" comments, but if you have constructive criticism then be sure to comment.[/quote]

[quote=MyRepublic][b][u]What I know about you[/u][/b] I don’t pretend I know much In fact like most of you I still use music as a crutch But what I do know I’ll say to you This is to the put down This is to the ones who aren’t looking around now This is to the short guys The tall girls The lisping academic And the people with sexuality curls This is to the chubby guys The brown eyes The not quite good enough for Friday night This is to the ones who can’t fall asleep sometimes Cuz the pretty people didn’t think before they shouted out those lies This is for those with fathers who always talk loud Who no matter what you did you could never ever make proud And most of all this is for those that don’t think they’re anything special at all The people like me who don’t want to get out of their bed because they’re scared of the fall I admit it That piece was to stall I needed time to think of ways to describe how truly awe inspiringly drop dead gorgeous, no homo but it’s fringing on sexual how amazing you are to me, and I’d need a lobotomy to forget that no word ending in -onomy ever found a being so intricately divine in the heavens above as you are to see. Let me start by saying that you are the apex of all that came before. It’s true All the kings and queens and heroes of history were all just working up to you You’re made of spiral staircases of information And if you don’t think that’s cool then leave this presentation You may not have good looks or athletic ability sure But, your brain is so powerful it makes supercomputers feel insecure And every atom that makes you who you are Came from a different indescribably massive star You are made of star stuff And as if that just wasn’t awesome enough Smiles are hardwired into the human brain And love literally relieves pain You have artwork on your fingertips that no one else can claim And your irises each sparkle with their own fucking name Imagine something beautiful The uncountable stars The trillions of sand grains Each sculpted to perfection by the weathering of crystal caves The infinite iridescent rainbows in a drenched sky The green, brown, and blue light makes when it passes through 14 billion eyes The millions of trees in a forest where it always rains Or the thousands of massive dunes in a desert that are too bright to look at straight faced The hundreds of laughs you hear every day Or the fifty different smiles you wear on your face Think about the seven world encompassing oceans so blue None of these can hope to compare to the beauty of the one you So next time someone tries to tell you who you are You look them right in the eyes and tell them what you know to be true “I am goddam magnificent and you are too!”[/quote]

[quote=GrandmasterD]this sucks BAD gay ;P[/quote]

[quote=GrandmasterD]Fine, fine I'll contribute with some stuff I had lying around: The music of life many sought yet none discovered this sound of silence [rule] my actions, my goals the end justifies the means mine justifies all [rule] I denounce this faith chosen for me for this is not what I want to be and soon you will see.. That it is not only I but also those who cry and even those who'll die even the health and the sick realise either slow or quick to chose above it all, reason and logic[/quote]

[quote=Searz]"even the health and the sick" Whut?[/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe]"Close your eyes" a random voice asked of me "Dear ser, are you happy?" "I am sad" is what I respond, "The solution is for me beyond". "But why are you sad? Is there so much pain you had?" "The pain of the future and the past, I have fear for the time that it will last." "Do not worry my friend" He said, "For now light will spread." "Forget about all the darkness in sight, because everything will be alright" And so I opened up my eyes, And all along, the darkness was nothing but lies. The light was always there, but now, I am aware. A story by Meiyjhe[/quote]

[quote=devdevil]Nunu's a little boy, ontop of a monkey Alistar's a moose who thinks he's hunky Shen is a ninja, faster than light Shaco's a clown who loves to fight Ryze is a genie, without a lamp Spamming lay waste on Karthus usually gives me cramp Singed is mad, and so is Mundo Nothing rhymes with Mundo except for Bundo? Annies a little girl who just wants to play Sivir farms minions all night and all day Amumu is sad 'cos nobody loves him Malphite is sad 'cos nobody plays him Cho'gath eats children and jam-filled crumpets Ezreal's a champion usually picked by fa....ns of league of legends! Janna will huff and blow you away When Heimerdinger's not banned he'll ruin your day Gragas is fat 'cos he drinks so much beer Taric's around as the game's token ***** Nasus is a dog, who stands like a man Kog'maw's pretty rubbish; dodge when you can Master Yi was too imba, a nerf was abound Garan took his place, a new easymode was found Pantheon's shield is pretty darn huge Ashe's hawk earns her money? It must be a scrooge Ehehehe...[/quote]

[quote=FireLord]a poem that no one should forget. defitinely the most important poem in the hole world "Our Father in heaven, hallowed be your name. Your kingdom come, your will be done, on earth as it is in heaven. Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our debts, as we also have forgiven our debtors. And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil."[/quote]

[quote=Meiyjhe][quote=FireLord] a poem that no one should forget. defitinely the most important poem in the hole world "Our Father in heaven, hallowed be your name. Your kingdom come, your will be done, on earth as it is in heaven. Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our debts, as we also have forgiven our debtors. And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil." [/quote] oh god xD Literally and figuraly :D[/quote]

[quote=FireLord][quote=Meiyjhe] [quote=FireLord] a poem that no one should forget. defitinely the most important poem in the hole world "Our Father in heaven, hallowed be your name. Your kingdom come, your will be done, on earth as it is in heaven. Give us this day our daily bread, and forgive us our debts, as we also have forgiven our debtors. And lead us not into temptation, but deliver us from evil." [/quote] oh god xD Literally and figuraly :D [/quote] i dont think that last sentance make very sense. its not linear at all[/quote]