[Yuki, The Blade Artisan]

[quote=Ryumanyamana][Yuki, The Blade Artisan] Yuki is a goofy cat(anthro)cloaked assassin. She excels at bursting single targets down with ease. Passive- Butcher Hook: After using an ability, her claws turns into hooks and her next basic attack has 5%/10%/15% more attack damage. Q- Hungry Kitty: Yuki's next basic attack will have be buffed to deal 20% 5 seconds more damage. This ability heals her 150/170/180/200/210(+20% AP) 18/16/14/12/9 cooldown. W- Garbage(might change later to something completely different): Yuki takes out a random object that she has found on the ground then chucks it at a target. The item deals 10/15/17/20/20(+90% AD) and is a 15/17/20/25/30% 5 second slow(Which is a hunk of cheese, coins, or a pair of plush dice) or it's a .85/1/1.25/1.5 second stun(Which is a glass bottle, tin can, teemo plush toy, or a can of graggy ice) if her passive is up. E- Blur of Blades: Yuki becomes fast, increasing her attack speed by 20/30/40/50/60% plus allowing her to go through units with 20%/25%/30/33/40% bonus movement speed for 4 seconds. If Yuki successfully basic attacks her target with her passive, her bonus movement speed is increased by 5%. Cooldown: 15/13/11/10/8 R- The Mid-air Executioner: Yuki pounces and pins a target to the ground, she throws her target straight up into the air then leaps up to strike them in the air dealing 100(+50%AD)true damage. During the 1.5 second duration of the ultimate, the target will be rooted throughout the 1.5 second ultimate. Yuki's passive also gets a bonus of having her passive becomes doubled. LORE(Still in progress you come up with the rest) Yuki is a cat that lives in Piltover constantly, causing trouble, annoying vi, and sometimes destroying public buildings by accident. STATS: Health: 420(50+ per level) Physical Damage: 55(3.75+ per level) Armor: 10(3.5+ per level) Magic Reistance: 20(2 per level) Attack Speed: 0.620(2.5% per level) Movement Speed: 345 Range: 125 SOUNDBOARD Walking: "Is it lunchtime yet?" "Strategy? What's that?" "Meow" "I don't think huge fists lady likes me" "Lalalalalala" Hungry Kitty: "Stab!" Energetic Dash: "wooo!" "*giggle*" "nya!" Blur of Blades: "Can't touch this!" The Mid-air executioner:"CHOPPY CHOPPY!" "TRY TO STEAL THIS KILL! I DARE YOU!" "EEEEEE YAAAAA!" Joke: "I'm only hungry on days that end with 'y' " Champion Select: "PICK ME! PICK ME!" Taunt: (Darius): Kill stealers... kill stealers everywhere... [More taunts will be made up][/quote]

[quote=Alcasea]bit OP perhaps ? -passive has 2 bonus, a armor pen and an increased damage. think of it as a sheen that has a built in black cleaver. op isn't it ? -W, you really can't do the Alt+W effect as it is a key binding issue. try to improvise. -R, lol it is a total of 500 dmg and that is not the op part. imagine in a team fight where the tank is only 301 hp left and a carry has only 150 left. who would you think you would use your ulti on ? most would say the carry but if you use it on the tank the second part of it would activate and your next BASIC ATTACK WOULD DEAL 200 TRUE DAMAGE. so you can really kill 1 person or burst down to persons. also a recap, for darius's ulti, he needs to kill one first before he can jump again, so technically he need to focus 1 person before fighting the other which would be disadvantageous, but in this cat's ulti you can just burst 2 enemy down and just finish them with your other skills and btw carries would be freaked out that you just almost halfed both their hp in just one skill XD[/quote]

[quote=rudyards]Other than the fact she's a cat person (which is honestly a sickeningly unoriginal idea), this character is full of flaws. Level 6 she has a nearly 200 true damage nuke, she's manaless, has built in sustain, and strong damage that also scales with her AD. So basically a better Riven.[/quote]

[quote=Ryumanyamana]Thank you very much for the feedback rudyards and Alcasea, I've been dying to hear some great criticism. In the LoL forums on pvp.net. Not many people have gave me great feed back like yours guys. Rudyards is right about how my idea is "a sickeningly unoriginal idea" I'll just have to give up on it. I just posted this idea just because I wanted somebody I think is awesome to be in leagues. It was worth the try though! TY :)[/quote]

[quote=rudyards]Sorry if I was overly harsh, I've just seen enough bad original champions that I'm just fed up with them >.< Keep working on ideas, you'll find one that works soon.[/quote]

[quote=Ryumanyamana]lol it's okay! I can clearly see that in one of your many replies with your duo critique partner, Alcasea. Maybe I can come up with a champion that will never be accepted into league of legends but that will make everybody who is stuck in bronze wish existed. I was working on a troll champion that becomes stronger depending on how bad his team is. By the way, thank you for your critique plus Aclasea's, I fixed some of the jacked up things about her that you mentioned :P. If you still see problems, just tell them to me![/quote]

[quote=rudyards]Her ult could probably have better scaling. The MS steroid on her E could last a little longer. Her W feels like Fiora's Q, and doesn't add much to her kit. She already has good mobility and steroids, so maybe some more straight damage? Or a tad bit of CC? Lower CD on her Q. Her passive looks fine. Good changes, now it's just a question of numbers tweaking and things.[/quote]

[quote=Ryumanyamana]Thanks, You think having her W a random stun or slow will work?[/quote]

[quote=rudyards]I'd avoid chance, as that's not really a League thing. Perhaps have it interact with her passive? Like if she has her passive up, it's a stun, slow otherwise. For that matter, maybe make the passive interact with abilities to give her some depth.[/quote]

[quote=Ryumanyamana]Cool, thanks for the W and passive interaction idea. I made it that she can stick to her target easier but because of the high damage, I decided to lower her stats to make her squishy to balance things out.[/quote]