So I managed to complete Chapter 2 yesterday. Had to stay up until like 6 AM but I did complete it! Please ignore any typos. They happen when it's really late and you've been writing for a long time :P I will fix them eventually so they're not a big issue. If possible give me your opinion on the introduced characters, the pacing and the writing. Be honest! Even if you think everything is trash go ahead and say it. I won't be offended.


Chapter 1:
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B3YLHgjoAg1yQjJtelV0dGFvM00&usp=sharing

Chapter 2:
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B3YLHgjoAg1yY3p0VFBRTjlLNFk&usp=sharing


If you have any questions go ahead and ask! I'll answer pretty much everything! =D