How does this review work:I'll be going into four 'main' topics: Cheatsheet, Content, Presentation and What can be Improved?. All of these topics alone can turn a great guide into an even better one. Just knowing the ins and outs of your champion alone won't be enough if you're not able to properly convey said information. The end goal is always to make it easier for the readers that come to your guide of course.I'll specify these main categories with purple text within this review, as well as some subcategories which will mostly depend on your guide chapters and for that I'll use the following rating system:

Cheatsheet

>Runes: Adequate

I can see that Lethal Tempo seems to be his most popular keystone. However, judging from some statistics, his most common page is Precision > Resolve with Second Wind and Unflinching. You have Bone Plating as your first rune page, how come? What makes this rune page stronger than ones shown by stats I wonder? Within your notes for this particular page you mention that it's your standard rune page, but why is it the standard one?

For the 2nd rune page you do a much better job at explaining why the rune page is useful. 3rd one makes 0 sense and me as a reader (who has no idea how to play Yone) does not know why this page should ever be picked over the standard page you showed first.

Only as the 4th page do you include the most popular "standard yone build" with Second Wind and Unflinching. However, here you contradict yourself. If this is the standard runes, then your first page is not the standard, if your first page is the standard then this one can't be a "standard page", do you get my point? None of the notes explain why these pages are different, nor why one should be picked more than the other, or if one should be removed because the other page is more favorable.

Last page is technically int, I'd remove it as it's not even good, but that decision I'll leave to you.

>Summoner Spells: Adequate

Personally I would remove the 2nd one and just keep 1 summoner spell option that has Flash/TP, not 2. They're the same spells and with the use of the notes, you can explain why both spells are similar regardless of which lane you go to, whether it be Toplane or Midlane.

>Items: Decent

The "Recommended Items" part right at the top should include a display of a full build. These are the items (and thus build) that will be shown within search lists and other places around MOBAFire, and even aside from that, it'll always be convenient to know what the most popular full build on Yone can be. For example, I play Syndra, 95% of games use Luden's, this means her most popular full build includes Luden's, even though there are other choices for mythics such as Liandry's.

As I do not play Yone myself, I will not necessarily comment on whether the item options are good or not, I trust that you know your champion well enough for this. However, I do feel like they could be structured just a tiny bit better (personally speaking). I like how you've done it at the moment, but I'd probably make it look a bit more organized by doing something along the lines of this:


Differences here is that Doran's Blade and Doran's Shield are moved to the top, these are starting items, your very first item in the game shouldn't be at the bottom of everything, while changing some names to make them easier to grasp. I would also explain more in the notes why these are optimal picks. Why is Doran's Blade good specifically into lanes that aren't heavy poke? Why is Doran's Shield good specifically when it's paired with Second Wind? Does it not ever work unless it's paired with this rune?

I have also removed the "Splitpush" and "Vs Tanks" builds as they only have a 1 item difference and this can instead just be explained within the situational item notes why these are built. Such as Hullbreaker being good as a secondary item if your intent is to splitpush, or that Blade of the Ruined King as a first item is incredibly useful against team compositions with a lot of tanks, or ones that build Heartsteel (You can also place this full build example as the one to display as recommended items).


I also broke these apart entirely and organized them the same way as with the prior items. It's harder and longer to explain these 1 by 1 if they're all grouped together. I also heavily dislike your notes here. You should never refer people to scroll further down to get the information you can just explain within your notes using a few sentences. Most people who read guides don't tend or want to scroll through the entire guide to find what they need, they will likely only check the cheatsheet (your stuff at the very top before the guide begins) to get their information before their game starts. If they played well and liked your guide after that, they'll more than likely come back to your guide to read the rest.

Moving down to the section you have for your item explanations and going off of them, I've given you some titles you could use for some items. Within the notes you can explain with maybe around 3-4 sentences why these items are good picks. Few examples can be that Maw of Malmortius is exceptional against bursty matchups e.g. Syndra / LeBlanc / Fizz. Mortal Reminder is great into anti heal like Soraka / Dr. Mundo / Vladimir. Serpent's Fang is good into opponents that can shield e.g. Janna / Lulu and so forth.

You've got 3 items that mostly affect tanks and are only ever built purely against tanks ( Blade of the Ruined King, Lord Dominik's Regards and Black Cleaver). Try to explain the differences between these, why is BotRK best against tanky bruisers and heartsteel users, and if it's the best, why even build dominik's regards at all? It makes sense to build if they stack a lot of armor, but Cleaver provides the exact same benefits. If Cleaver is best used for toplane and general heavy armor, and BotRK is best used against tankier bruisers in general, then Dominik's doesn't make any sense to buy for any lane.

Note: Immortal Shieldbow is also present 2 times in your current situational items you show, just to mention and I do not understand why Phantom Dancer is a good item for Yone aside from being a potential last item pick instead of boots (hence the ???).

>Ability Order: Decent

Not everyone knows how to skill on Yone. His current most popular ability orders are Q max > E max or Q max > W max. Most people do not understand the differences between why each one is skilled. What makes E max stronger and what does it help with vs what makes W max stronger and what does that one help with. These should be explained within the notes, it won't take long.

The 2nd order is still int, and if you "shouldn't do it", then I don't get why it's even present.

>Threats & Synergies: Adequate

I like what you've done with Threats and I don't think they need any changes (aside for if you want to make some of the descriptions that are relatively short a bit more in-depth like with e.g. Shyvana). However I do believe you could touch on some Synergies that may work well with Yone (I would think about potential junglers that may function well together with you, think about e.g. gank setups).

Content

>Introduction: Exquisite

Note: You could always center your images to make them a little better to look at, rather than it being more towards the left side of the screen (as is default).

>Cons and Pros: Exquisite

Note: Your title says "Cons and Pros" yet you show the Pros first. Should be "Pros and Cons".

>Situational Items Explained: Adequate

I believe this section could be expanded upon and renamed to just "Items". Explain the other items you can buy on Yone e.g. Kraken Slayer / Infinity Edge, not just situational items.

The items can also be split apart with spaces inbetween each description (or alternatively if you use BBCode to have an icon of the item towards the left whilst the description with the text is towards the right) so that the overall section doesn't turn into such a wall of text.

>Early Game/Laning Top: Exquisite

Note: Title can be changed to "Laning/Early Phase [Top]" to make more sense.

>Mid Game on Yone Top: Exquisite

Note: Title can be changed to "Mid Game [Top]" to make more sense. This is already a Yone guide, doesn't really need to be explained each and every time.

>Late Game on Yone Top: Exquisite

Note: Title can be changed to "Late Game [Top]" to make more sense.

>Laning Phase/Early Game Mid: Adequate

Here you do explain the reasoning and purpose behind why Second Wind is a good pick on Yone - it helps with midlane matchups. This however, is not present within your cheatsheet whatsoever. People will not read this far just to be able to know if Second Wind is good for Toplane or primarily for Midlane, to point out.

Here you also explain that Yone isn't a good roamer and then delve into the importance of helping your jungler (if you're a midlaner). But what if you're playing Yone as a toplaner and want to roam? Then what happens?

Note: Title can be changed to "Laning/Early Phase [Mid]" to make more sense.

>Mid Game on Yone Mid: Exquisite

Note: Title can be changed to "Mid Game [Mid]" to make more sense.

>Late Game on Yone Mid: Exquisite

Note: Title can be changed to "Late Game [Mid]" to make more sense.

>Skin Tier List: Exquisite

Note: While it looks completely fine, I am personally not a big fan of skin tier lists. It only really acts as padding to make the guide slightly longer and doesn't offer any valuable information to the reader. I'll let you decide though if you want to keep it or remove it but that's my take on this section.

>Additional Tips: Exquisite

Note: Just remove the last sentence about adding more, this doesn't really need to be explained. Once you find more examples, you can just put them in and include those examples, no exclaimer is needed.

>Match Up Guides: Will need a lot of work

The only reason for this one being judged so low is due to it being as unfinished as it is. However, I would also like to point out that it'd be much better if you sort the matchups to make them organized. Start with midlane matchups only (or whichever role Yone is most picked at) and explain them first in detail. Then move over to Toplane matchups. Having matchups of both roles scattered (Ahri and Akali first then immediately towards Darius?) is confusing.

The matchups themselves are completely fine with its explanation. Only thing that could be improved would be to fully remove the runes part, it may be easy to keep it up to date now with only 5 matchups or so, but once you've got around 50 (standard for most matchups in solo lanes give or take) coupled with video footage you wanted to include, it won't be fun. If a particular matchup requires a certain rune to be used, or a certain rune page to be favored, just explain it with text like with the rest.

Could also look into making the texts more descriptive and longer (or add more), it can benefit.

Note: Title can be changed to "Matchups" - it's easy enough to understand that it's a guide about matchups for Yone.

Presentation

> Execution: Inadequate

If there's one thing I'd say about your guide that I feel like you can improve on, it'll definitely be this. I know very well that making use of BBCode can be a very tedious task in of itself to make use of or just to be able to get familiar with in general, but when it comes to presentation, making use of some more code can really make your guide become more alive, so to say.

Here are a few coding guides that we already have on the site that could help you if you'd be willing to dedicate some of your time to learning it (or if you just want some quick templates to make your guide look a bit more tidy):

- Making A Guide (has lots of free to use templates)
- BBCode Guide (the actual bbcode guide if you'd want to know how different codes work)
- A Table Coding Guide (talks about the bbcode that is called tables)
- Responsive Columns (talks about responsive columns; mainly for mobile side coding)

>Theme of guide (color scheme): Will need a lot of work

I feel like having a bit of a color theme would go a long way for any guide. This will be especially clear if you were to incorporate some BBCode for your sections. When I say the word 'color theme' I mean using colors that best represents the champion & guide you're trying to make. For example, you're currently using the "Inkshadow" skin, which means that a good color theme to have could be e.g. a darker Purple or Gold colors to fit with the skin. If you were to not use a skin, Red would be a very nice combination with that one and so forth.

Your guide is also riddled with spelling mistakes. I would recommend to check your spelling, or alternatively you can use sites that help you accomplish this goal e.g. Google Documents / Microsoft Word.

What can be Improved?

Making guides more extensive takes a very long time and a lot of dedication, but if you want to spend more time making your guide more informative, try to focus on explaining topics like:

- Knowing how to effectively roam without it negatively impacting you or your team - You touch this briefly for Midlane and not at all for Toplane
- How to properly make use of wards to gain vision - you explain this a little but it can be more in-depth
- Splitpushing - you explain that you should split as a toplaner, but how do you do that effectively? Explain/Show examples
- How to take advantage of the junglers during the earlier phases regardless of lane
- How to transfer your lead (if you get one) into a potential win - Regardless of lane
- How to play the game if you do end up falling behind - You only mention that you shouldn't, and should focus on getting a lead at all cost, but if worst comes to pass then what do you do, lose?
- The act of side laning in general - You touch this briefly for Midlane but I feel like this can be expanded. How do you avoid the negative effects side laning could bring?
- Obviously more matchups and examples of matchups but you already know this I'm sure

These topics can all be useful topics to explain, and of course there can be multiple more I haven't mentioned that you can talk about when it comes to Midlane (and Toplane) as a role, but I feel like these are some of the more important ones to consider.

Overall Thoughts

For a guide you've made I believe it's pretty good. I am impressed with the information. Like mentioned already, if you fix up some sections a little bit more and work on the presentation aspect of your guide, it can definitely become a solid source for players looking to pick up Yone. I hope this review is of help. :)