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Did you draw that? That's freakin' amazing. We could really use a talent like you over on Create-A-Champion. ;)
Change the name of your Q, as "Empower" is already a Jax skill.
W is quite overpowered. 50 armor reduction means that with ArP runes and maxing that skill first, you'll be consistently doing true damage to basically all squishies. 50 armor is too much. I recommend you either nerf that or change it to a percentile based skill.
His E does far too little damage to be useful - it's a worse version of
Two-Shiv Poison. If you added in a DoT effect or a similar debuff, that would be better.
Change the name of your Q, as "Empower" is already a Jax skill.
W is quite overpowered. 50 armor reduction means that with ArP runes and maxing that skill first, you'll be consistently doing true damage to basically all squishies. 50 armor is too much. I recommend you either nerf that or change it to a percentile based skill.
His E does far too little damage to be useful - it's a worse version of






Jebus McAzn wrote:
Did you draw that? That's freakin' amazing. We could really use a talent like you over on Create-A-Champion. ;)
Change the name of your Q, as "Empower" is already a Jax skill.
W is quite overpowered. 50 armor reduction means that with ArP runes and maxing that skill first, you'll be consistently doing true damage to basically all squishies. 50 armor is too much. I recommend you either nerf that or change it to a percentile based skill.
His E does far too little damage to be useful - it's a worse version of

Yeah i draw that in photoshop. (Also i draw Nefarius, which you can see in this forum aswell).
I will post some works later in CaC.
I see, that 50 armor reduction is way to heavy.
I would say, let's change the damage from E. I would simply double it.
What do you think?
HOLY **** YOU MADE THAT? THAT IS PAR TO RIOT ART...
DAMN!
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DAMN!
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Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
WTB a good drawing of my champ suggestion ;) Nice job!
RE: The champion...
He just seems a little dull. He hits things and does damage in melee range, kinda boring I feel. There's nothing that made me think "damn this champion sounds awesome". It's a suggestion forum, go crazy!!!
Q - Not sure what to say really. Damage buff... seems balanced... doesn't make me go OMG DAT **** IS COOOOL!
W - A bit like Jarvan's Q mixed with a dash forward? The armor pen is pretty crazy. It's an ok skill I guess.
E - Ranged slow. I'm struggling to think of witty things to say, I'm just not getting inspired by any of this. The slow needs buffing.
R - This is pretty cool I guess. Life regen though? That seems a bit ****py. You don't mean Lifesteal do you? I suppose that would be cooler but it's still totally unoriginal (Sion, anyone?).
Passive - Any relevance with the 11? Seems way too random for my liking. 11 attacks is too much, it will rarely activate. The main problem is that this dude has nothing increasing his attack speed. This champ is begging for an attack speed increase skill
Overall
As I said before, it's just so safe... safe is dull, especially in a champion suggestion forum that Riot will never look at! You're meant to be coming up with crazy awesome **** from your imagination, don't tell me that an attack damage buff, a ranged slow and an armor penetrating dash charge are the best your brain could come up with.
In addition to this, there is like no synergy. The passive seems pretty interesting, but he has no skills that boost his attack speed. You could add attack speed to Q, which would help. Or his R. You should think of how his skills are used in combination with each other, at the moment it's just like 4 random skills put together.
RE: The champion...
He just seems a little dull. He hits things and does damage in melee range, kinda boring I feel. There's nothing that made me think "damn this champion sounds awesome". It's a suggestion forum, go crazy!!!
Q - Not sure what to say really. Damage buff... seems balanced... doesn't make me go OMG DAT **** IS COOOOL!
W - A bit like Jarvan's Q mixed with a dash forward? The armor pen is pretty crazy. It's an ok skill I guess.
E - Ranged slow. I'm struggling to think of witty things to say, I'm just not getting inspired by any of this. The slow needs buffing.
R - This is pretty cool I guess. Life regen though? That seems a bit ****py. You don't mean Lifesteal do you? I suppose that would be cooler but it's still totally unoriginal (Sion, anyone?).
Passive - Any relevance with the 11? Seems way too random for my liking. 11 attacks is too much, it will rarely activate. The main problem is that this dude has nothing increasing his attack speed. This champ is begging for an attack speed increase skill
Overall
As I said before, it's just so safe... safe is dull, especially in a champion suggestion forum that Riot will never look at! You're meant to be coming up with crazy awesome **** from your imagination, don't tell me that an attack damage buff, a ranged slow and an armor penetrating dash charge are the best your brain could come up with.
In addition to this, there is like no synergy. The passive seems pretty interesting, but he has no skills that boost his attack speed. You could add attack speed to Q, which would help. Or his R. You should think of how his skills are used in combination with each other, at the moment it's just like 4 random skills put together.
Awesome to read about this champ! On EU West I am named Argus, so that would be strange to play as Argus, with the champion Argus. Like the idea anyway, but, I am Argus! :( http://www.lolking.net/summoner/euw/22807108
With his fast movement he is able to hunt enemies down but also to help teammates.
Bruiser
Melee
Fighter
Support
Stats
Damage 52.4 (+3.1 / per level)
Health 436 (+86 / per level)
Mana 215 (+45 / per level)
Move Speed 330
Armor 20.2 (+3.8 / per level)
Spell Block 30 (+1.25 / per level)
Health Regen 1.34 (+0.15 / per level)
Mana Regen 0 (+0 / per level)
Q) Empower
At a cost of 40/50/60/70/80 Mana, Argus empowers himself, gaining +10%/+15%/+20%/+25%+/30% attack damage.
The Empower State lasts for 8 seconds.
W) Swift Strike
Argus pushes forward doing 70/130/180/220/280 (+0,6) physical damage do all enemies standing in his way.
Enemies hit by this strike get their armor reduced by 10/20/30/40/50 for 5 seconds.
Cost 80/100/100/120/140 Mana
E) Track the trackless
Argus throws his Kukri's at a target enemy Champion. On hit, the Kukri's do 50/70/100/150/180 (+0,7) physical damage.
Enemies hit by the Kukri's start bleeding. While bleeding, the enemy loses movement speed by 5-10%.
Cost 50/55/60/70/75 Mana
R) Teamwork
Argus gets empowered by the help of his teammates. Also he empowers his teammates.
When Teamwork is activated Argus gets 30%/40%/50% movement speed for 5/7/9 seconds when allies are standing
within 600 range. As long as an allied Champion is in his range the Champion gains +10%/+20%/+30% (+0,5 magic) life regen.
Cost 100/120/140 Mana
Passive) Battle Shout
Every 11th attack will force Argus to enrage. Argus shouts a battlecry, which deals 15% (+1% per lvl) of his attack damage to all
minions standing within 500 range.
And here is a little speedpaint: