I tried to hold it back til' I had a bit more experience with him, I had pressed Publish instead of Save by accident. I wanted to test a few more things on him but, I've been having a pretty solid game with him as this, I'm not 100% behind it, but mistakes happen.

I understand the top two posts I just have to make improvements as I go now, wouldn't have gotten the same start I would've liked.

Thank you for feedback by the way.

I'm not sure I agree with this. The wriggles doesn't fit at all in my opinion. The life steal isn't that great early game since you are a melee that isn't jungling, so you won't have the luxury of attacking things repeatedly. Your abilities won't gain you life since none of them proc on hit effects. The armor and ad is, i admit, good all game long. However the passive from madreds isn't good for a laner either since you don't want to be constantly attacking creeps. Basically you are buying a 1600 gold item for half of the abilities. There are much cheaper way to gain sustainability in lane.

I also think you should get at least the brutalizer before trinity to help you with more ad and cds. The belt, if you go this route, should absolutely turn into a frozen mallet. This will make your passive proc EVERY TIME you auto attack.

I don't understand the fad of pushing out a guide a few days after a champs release. It doesn't even give enough time to really get a feel for what items are core and what are situational.

Guide: Overall it has a strong base, you've got a strong appearance between pictures and formatting. But the guide is still pre-mature, you could have waited and added even more to make it better than it is right now.

Build: ArP fine, flat armor fine, flat magic resist? BAD BAD BAD. MR per level would be better IMO. AD quints....NO, just no you could go with AS or movespeed ANYTHING BUT THOSE FAIL ****ING AD QUINTS. I don't understand the fascination of getting a bonus ~7AD early game. Sounds like something a kid came up with when he was flipping burgers.

Items.....Well I guess not jungling and getting a mini razor->Wriggles is ok....I'd rather see Doran's Blade/Shield in there. Sure cloth armor and HP pots give you solid sustain, but you're not going to assassinate anyone with a lack of damage if you're 1v1 solo top. Mercs aren't bad, but you could get Zerker boots and QSS (Quick Silver Sash) and pick and choose when you want enemy CC to wear off. Tri-Force or FM...Rather debateable right now as to which is actually better on Talon. Atma's Impailer? Meh not terrible I guess, but there are better options to give you better damage. Off tanky is the Meta but I've seen this champ excell when he was built "pure" damage.

I wish you had taken more time in constructing this and waited to release it. Right now it's incomplete and there isn't much evidence as to why building talon a certain way is better than building him another. I'd -1 if I had the power to currently...then I'd want to upvote later (IFFFF) you fixed some of the issues.

But that's just my honest opinion, it's not a bad build or guide, but it could be sooo much better.