Alyn, the Avenger of the Roses

[quote=TehGus][i](Rosalyn) Alyn, the Avenger of the Roses[/i] [b]Passive: Crimson Revitalization[/b] Every time Alyn receives a healing effect, her AS and AD are increased by 5% and 5, respectively, for 6 seconds. This buff can stack up to 6 times. [b]Q: Flourishing Saber[/b] Alyn dashes to a champion in a small range and does two aerial superior sword slashes, dealing 30/60/90/120/150 (+0.7:bonus AD) physical damage and knocking them up while she performs the skill. Alyn can not interrupt this skill’s animation once it has been cast. Range: 250 Mana Cost: 60 Cooldown: 12/11/10/9/8 seconds [b]W: Pollen Explosion[/b] Alyn ignites the magical pollen from her purse, liberating a cloud around herself that turns her invisible for 3.5 seconds (casting skills or attacking will reveal her) and silences enemies around her for 1 second. The cloud remains at its original area for 5 seconds, slowing champions that stay on it by 25%/29%/33%/36%/39%. AoE radius: 100 Mana Cost: 100 Cooldown: 16/15/14/13/12 seconds [b]E: Vicious Thorns[/b] Passive: Alyn heals herself upon (basic) attacking an enemy champion according to the amount of damage reduced by their armor. 50% of the damage lowered by an enemy’s Armor is converted into Health for her, capping at 30/60/90/120/150 (+0.1:AP). Active: Alyn summons a small spiral thorny vine at the target location, dealing 50/80/110/140/170 (+0.6 AP) magic damage and healing herself for 20/40/60/80/100 (+0.2:AP) for every champion hit by it. Additionally, extra thorns form on the ground around the initial thorn, dealing 10/20/30/40/50 (+0.2 AP) magic damage every second for 3 seconds. The passive bonus is disabled while this skill is on cooldown. AoE radius (Initial Thorn): 45 AoE radius (Spawn Thorns): 400 Cast Range: 600 Mana Cost: 50/60/70/80/90 Cooldown: 14/13/12/11/10 seconds [b]R: Impaling Thorn[/b] Alyn slowly jumps aerially to the target location, landing on it after 1 second. Upon landing on the area, a giant impaling vine comes out of the floor, dealing 300/400/500 (+1:AP) damage and stunning enemies hit by it for 1 second. AoE radius (Thorn): 65 Cast Range: 700 Mana Cost: 100/110/120 Cooldown: 100/85/70 seconds A product sponsored by Boredom, Inc.[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno]Very cool champion idea, I like it. Especially his/her E is awesome. Btw what do you mena by ray?, radius maybe? than 60 and 80 are very small, a radius around your champion should imo be at least 100 range. The inner radius of jarvan's cataclysm wall is 300 range. Anyway still a good champion, it looks liek it will be fun :). would you mind commenting on 1 of my ideas: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/champion-and-item-ideas/earyu-the-winddragon-master-of-the-skies-8150 http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/champion-and-item-ideas/nerthus-the-one-bounded-to-the-earth-dragon-8482 http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/champion-and-item-ideas/substory-rage-of-the-guardians-communtiy-creation-8523[/quote]

[quote=TehGus]Radius, yep. They're meant to be really short, though.[/quote]

[quote=Dzeno]yeah, but do you know how freaking short that is 60 and 80, melee range is 125 to 175 range I still think to should be a bit higher[/quote]

[quote=TehGus][quote=Dzeno] yeah, but do you know how freaking short that is 60 and 80, melee range is 125 to 175 range I still think to should be a bit higher [/quote] They're meant to be about as large as a champion.. Note that we're talking about a radius, not about a full circle... So it's 60x2 and 80x2 = 120 and 160. Her ultimate is slightly bigger than a Teemo shroom, and her W is slightly smaller than Tristana's W AoE.[/quote]

[quote=deyrth]Nerf Q to keep E wonderful? Playable without knockup, or, knockup rather than stun on ult? Anyhow hard CC on ult. Soft CC on W already too, for full damage on E, which is awesome. Pollencloud lock into thorn/lifesteal garden. Nerfed Q target any target too, so, A skillshot dash that reveals any target hit, ignores collision, and deals the first target hit two superior aerial slashes for 30/60/90/120/150 (+0.7:bonus AD) Range: 250 Mana Cost: 60 Cooldown: 13/12/11/10/8 seconds Or, However. haha[/quote]

[quote=TehGus][quote=deyrth] Nerf Q to keep E wonderful? Playable without knockup, or, knockup rather than stun on ult? Anyhow hard CC on ult. Soft CC on W already too, for full damage on E, which is awesome. Pollencloud lock into thorn/lifesteal garden. Nerfed Q target any target too, so, A skillshot dash that reveals any target hit, ignores collision, and deals the first target hit two superior aerial slashes for 30/60/90/120/150 (+0.7:bonus AD) Range: 250 Mana Cost: 60 Cooldown: 13/12/11/10/8 seconds Or, However. haha [/quote] Excuse me... what?[/quote]

[quote=deyrth]I was saying I don't think Q should knock up, citing that it is a lot of CC for the character. I suggested a rewrite of the skill, and I said I thought E was badass.[/quote]