Bee's Guide Review Thread

[quote=abzilla]Summoner name: Abzilla Summoner level: 30 Post count: 117 Spelling and grammar check desired: NO Guide review desired: YES Champion of guide to be reviewed: [[ryze]] why I would Like this reviewed: I want this guide to flourish. What i want you to focus on: I would also like comments on the layout. Guide link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ryze-the-mana-hungry-mage-detailed-guide-149557]ryze, the mana hungry Mage (detailed Guide)[/url] Thanks![/quote]

[quote=Icuonuez]Summoner Name: Icuonuez Summoner Level: 30 Post count: 312 Spelling and Grammer Check: Done Guide review desired: Yes Champion of Guide to be Reviewed: [[Leona]] Why I would Like this Reviewed: I need feedback on my format and choices. What I Want you to Focus on: Format, Item Choices, Information Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leona-like-a-deer-in-headlights-136716]Here[/url] EDIT: Also, really good job so far! +Rep'd![/quote]

[quote=NicknameMy]Summoner Name: NicknameMy Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: ~1275 Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: YES, It definitly needs one. I am german and I am bad at proofreading at all.^^ Guide Review Desired(this includes multiple chapters): YES, of course. I changed some things around because of Triple [[doran's blade]] at my [[garen]] guide, which I now feature in my guide. And, I really don't like [[garen]] builds on top with [[sword of the occult]] in the cheat sheet. Or full tank [[garen]]. I think you know what I mean.^^ Why Bee Would Like to Review this guide: To know anything about the one with the highest earlygame damage at all and who is Mr. Spin to Win, [[garen]]. As an off-tank.^^ The guide also includes some music, so if you want to have fun, read it and listen to music from [[garen]] at same time.^^ Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/garen-spin-to-win-is-possible-revamped-133756]Garen, Spin to Win is possible REVAMPED[/url][/quote]

[quote=Taneren]I would actually like to get proofreading first, but I had a lot of helping with most my grammatic errors and coding errors, so there should not be many left! Most of my errors now are probally because I wrote the sentence in a wrong way (My native language is not English). But otherwise, it would be awesome if you could do a review while doing the proofreading as well :) Summoner Name: Taneren (EU-West). Summoner Level: 30. Post Count: 158 Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: NO, but those that remain are minor. Guide Review Desired: YES Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: [[Taric]], covering more than just the 'usual' support build. Why I Would Like This Reviewed: I am always looking for ways to improve my guide, since I am currently lying as number #1 on the list. I feel the need to make it as good as possible, and help the readers understand what I mean. What I Want You To Focus On: The guide overall, mostly how I describe the different things. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/taric-all-around-support-ap-jungle-ad-amp-tank-137637 Thank you, if you do this for me I will be sure to +rep you. -Taneren.[/quote]

[quote=princessmisery]Summoner Name: TeachezofPeachez Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 100 Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: No Guide Review Desired: Yes please Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: [icon=swain] Why I Would Like This Reviewed: I've redone the whole structure and worked on this guide quite a lot since I first started it. I'm hoping that you will think it's a helpful guide overall. What I Want You To Focus On: That it's helpful to new Swain players. That the guide fills it's purpose and looks decent. Guide Link: Swain Stamp in my sig, please. :)[/quote]

[quote=Beeswarm17]New format has been posted! Sorry for the guide review delays. I'm not ignoring you guys. I just had finals to deal with. Now that I have finished them, I will be returning to my guide reviews. It may take me a little while, but it's because I'm trying to be thorough. Thanks for your patience! :)[/quote]

[quote=koksei]Summoner Name:koksi Summoner Level:30 Post Count:130 Requesting: Guide Review Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: Lux Why I Would Like This Reviewed: To improve my guide more, to help people who wanna play Lux. What I Want You To Focus On: content, image Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/profile/koksei-135234[/quote]

[quote=Canoas]Summoner Name: Canoas Summoner Level: 30 Post Count: 1400something Requesting: Guide Review, but if you find any mistake feel free to warn me = P Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: Janna Why I Would Like This Reviewed: I completely changed my guide and would like a review. What I Want You To Focus On: It depends on your experience. If you know how to play supports well then I'd like criticism on the build, mainly the usage of Aegis, Rabadon's and Banshee's. I'd also appreciate a look on the ward map in case I missed an important spot. If you don't know how to play then I'd like you to focus on how easy the guide was to read and understand. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-full-support-72540[/quote]

[quote=mastajdog]Summoner Name:jdogheartveranus Summoner Level:30 Post Count:740 Requesting: Spell Check/Guide Review Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed:Sivir Why I Would Like This Reviewed: I think it's pretty good, however, i'd appriciate the advice necessary to move it to the next level What I Want You To Focus On:appearance and viability if possible Guide Link:[url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sivir-what-minions-did-you-have-there-updated-post-remake-99980]here[/url][/quote]

[quote=Beeswarm17]Please choose either spell check or guide review. I am only doing one or the other from now on.[/quote]