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Bee's Guide Review Thread

Creator: Beeswarm17 November 24, 2011 10:43pm
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I reviewed your guide, it's archived, I downvoted on your personality because it was a great guide.
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Okay, well I'm not going to get mad about that because I did actually put in a fail-link there. It's fixed now. :)
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Summoner Name: Calibern
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 300ish
Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: No, but feel free to tell me if I have grammar errors.
Guide Review Desired: YES
Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: Xin Zhao
Why I Would Like This Reviewed: Need more feed back
What I Want You To Focus On: Anything you think I could improve one
Guide Link: Xin Zhao Bane of Squishies
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Clicking the Rep button will end the world, do not click it! (Reverse psychology FTW)
Thank to AlexanPT, JakofAllSpaydes,JEFFY40HANDS, KingCasanova and reppinFTC for the amazing signatures.

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I have added you to my list of other reviewers , I also copied a bit of your lay-out to improve my own thread. Please PM me if you want me to remove it.
Thanks to Plickz and Alexanpt for the awesome Sigs!
And check out my build on skarner
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Summoner Name:Marisi
Summoner Level:30
Post Count:271
Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: NO
Guide Review Desired: YES
Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: Nocturne
Why I Would Like This Reviewed: I still feel I can improve my guide and I would love to know how. I already got this guide reviewed by Adonikam, jhoijhoi, sirspank and icuonez. But still I would like some more comments telling me how to improve it.
What I Want You To Focus On: Everything exept the lack of vids, and especially the mastery section since it hasn´t been reviewed yet.
Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/make-em-go-nocturne-is-op-riot-should-nerf-him-105574
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Summoner Name: IceCreamy8
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 504.
Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: Not really, I don't think there are many errors but if you find any please let me know.
Guide Review Desired: Yes please!
Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: Janna
Why I Would Like This Reviewed: I am curious about how other people think about my aggressive Janna build, and of course my guide in general.
What I Want You To Focus On: The build, the visual appearance, the amount of info (and how good it is).
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-blow-your-enemies-away-114075

Thanks in advance ^^

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Two reviews down, 6 currently remain. Proofing kinda takes me a while, so I apologize if I take a little while. I'll have more time once the weekend is over with. My family keeps me occupied.

Keep sending reviews this way. :)
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Might take a couple of your guides to review since im getting NOTHING on my blog <.<


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Thanks Bee! I got another one for the queue (I expect you will find more if the same from my Shyv guide)

Summoner Name:Kazega SN
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Post Count: 141
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Guide Review Desired: YES
Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed:Katarina
Why I Would Like This Reviewed: To make it better/Publicity
What I Want You To Focus On: Conveyance
Guide Link:Katarina Playing with Knives

and you can look at my guide if you really want to Nighthawk.
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Summoner Name: Astrolia (NA)
Summoner Level: 30
Post Count: 81
Spelling and Grammar Check Desired: No
Guide Review Desired: Yes
Champion Of Guide To Be Reviewed: Sona
Why I Would Like This Reviewed: Looking for more opinions and possible spots for improvement.
What I Want You To Focus On: Some places where I could clarify or expand would be useful.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fizz-patch-a-wall-of-text-about-supporting-as-sona-130139
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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