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Thanks to Jhoi for the EPIC wallpaper! +rep her if you can! :D

Read this before you post a guide!

And make sure to read this too! :D

In this thread i'm only aiming to give guides some publicity. Around 600 guides PER DAY are posted on Mobafire and not very many ever make it anywhere. Most of them don't even have any comments on them. I hope that by reviewing threads I can give some of those guides some publicity and open peoples eyes to them.

In order to have your guide reviewed by me, use this format:

Guide For (champion):
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:
What I'd like you to focus on:
Guide Link:


After you do that, i'll give you my review in this format on your own guide's comments:

A wild NIGHTHAWK appeared! Wild NIGHTHAWK used Review Guide!

Review for: Your name here Champion Guide
Constructive Criticism
  • Points of possible improvement

Verdict:

Overall Thoughts on Guide.

Head on down to My Review thread If you want to have some more comments on your build or if you want to discuss it some more :D

I will also post in this thread about what I read in your guide in this format:

Name + Champion + Guide
Verdict:
Possible Improvements:

What do I expect in return? Nothing, really. The only thing that would make me happy is some +rep. However I do this for you, not me :D

If you also want a second opinion, you can head on down to Jhoijhoi's Review thread

New rule! I will be ignoring all guide's where the user has less then 100 posts until I get back on track with my reviews!

(^ means i'll get to yours after I do the rest)


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Reserved for Verdicts of Guides!
Akali
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AngelPixe's Akali Guide
Verdict: Good guide, good build. Pretty good explanations too.
Possible Improvements: Runes, Masteries and grammatical and spelling errors :D
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Amumu
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Jebus Mcazn's Amumu Guide
Verdict: Extremely good guide with tons of detail. Probably the best tanking guide for Amumu on the site.
Possible Improvements: Runes and masteries feel the need to be a bit better, also appears to have a huge wall of text at points which can turn the reader off.
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Ashe
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Jhoijhoi's Ashe Guide
Verdict: Real pro guide, nice mix of damage and survivability + great explanation.
Possible Improvements: Masteries, Runes, maybe some item changes too.
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Janna
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Scrax's Janna Guide
Verdict: Def a good guide, nice humour, nice explanations, hot chick. It's all there.
Possible Improvements: Maybe use images a bit more? Items are a bit to healthy lol, imo you need either some AP for your shield or some more tankiness.
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Jarvan IV

Sacull_Kinslayer Jarvan IV Guide
Verdict: Very good guide, nice explanations, nice format.
Possible Improvements: Jungle Jarvan > Lane Jarvan.
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Malzahar
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Piksel4o's Malzahar Guide
Verdict: A very good guide with a lot of good things to it. Explain's pretty well too.
Possible Improvements: Runes should probs be fixed. IMO DFG would fit in well.
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Master Yi
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Palzm's Master Yi Guide
Verdict: Good guide. Short and sweet.
Possible Improvements: Items, explanations.
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Nidalee
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th3BlackAngel's Nidalee Guide
Verdict: Good guide. Items/Runes imo could be a bit better, however explanations are good.
Possible Improvements: Feels a bit short tbh. Lengthen up the explanations and it'll be good I imagine.
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Soraka
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The_Nameless_Bard's Soraka Guide
Verdict: Good guide for an AP/Tank/Support Soraka.
Possible Improvements: Items, runes, masteries.
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Vladimir
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Sacull_Kinslayer's Vladimir Guide
Verdict: Good guide. Some nice insight into Vlad.
Possible Improvements: Items and runes is about it.


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Reserved in case anyone else wants to review guides here! :D

Also:

Guides I still need to review:

VKZ95 wrote:

Guide for: Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what experienced players think of my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: items (what could be changed)
Guide Link: Mordekaiser



ChefoSLR wrote:

Champion Guide for: Leona

Reasons why I want you to review it: I think it's a very in-depth guide on Leona, I worked on it for 4 days. If I can get some comments from a real pro, that would be great. =)

Things I want you to focus on: My choice for masteries and runes and whether my explanations are good enough for everyone to understand.

Link: Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)


palzm wrote:

Guide For: Kassadin
Why: to improve. getting no attention either :O
What I'd like you to focus on: All of it
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/void-ninja-104144


Quoted:

Guide For : Nocturne
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'd like some feedback from pros.
What I'd like you to focus on: Build order, format of the guide, what i should add, etc. Pretty much just anything I can change in it.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fedturne-that-dark-thing-in-the-jungle-107889


Keels wrote:

Guide for: Singed.
Why I want it reviewed: I think I finally have all my coding down. I learned what /center meant, a criticism of my renekton guide. So tell me if I've reached the mountaintop, because that's probably gonna be my last guide.
Do I need more humor? Videos? Results? Graphs(I hate making graphs)?
Buh


Aharan wrote:

Guide for: Corki
Why: To help make it better, also I love criticism, helps me make things better.
What'd I like you to focus on: Is it aesthetically appealing? Can I liven things up?
(P.S I already asked Jhoijhoi to review it, and she has, but I would like more then one opinion)
Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/corki-insert-creative-name-here-90103


xIPainIx wrote:

Guide For (champion): Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: i'd like to know what i could add to make it better :)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think can be added or changed.
Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-that-funky-monkey-detailed-guide-106047

Thanks in advance


ShadowNet wrote:

Guide for (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To help me improve it. I need some good criticism.
What I'd like you to focus on: Everything.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/carry-me-morde-108278?page=1



Guide for (champion): Shaco
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want more attention and +1's.
What I'd like you to focus on: How awesome the guide is.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shaco-ahueahueahue-86236


Bryun wrote:

Guide For (champion): Akali
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Anything jhoijhoi missed. (Don't mention a gameplay section though, I'm getting to that...)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's not right.
Guide Link: Akali: The Epitome of an Assassin.


Xiron wrote:

Guide For (champion): Wukong

Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Wanna get your opinion

What I'd like you to focus on: Anything (maybe some sort of spelling check due english is not my mother tongue - nah. forget that one.)

Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-u-no-steal-bananas-108211


guiken wrote:

Hi this is my first attempt (Although trying to be extremely competent and thorough in execution) To write a MobaFire Guide. I've chosen Leona since I've played her constantly, every day since her release.

Guide For (champion): Leona
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I am always looking for ways to improve the information presented to really create a valuable resource for the community not just an opinion based build.

What I'd like you to focus on: The usefulness of the information presented, any errors/omissions and any further improvements in readability.

Guide Link: Leona: Try to leave a Dent! [Full Guide]


Delandel wrote:

Guide For (champion): Lee Sin
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide, poor ratings, unsure of what to improve.
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lee-sin-done-right-videos-included-108880



Guide For : Cassiopeia
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'd like the constructive criticism (I haven't written too many guides, but I really think this one is decent.)
What I'd like you to focus on: All of it :D
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/cassiopeia-spamming-is-required-109390



Guide For : Janna
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see if people think it's viable.
What I'd like you to focus on: All of it :D
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-harmless-breeze-my-***-108097


Quoted:

Guide For (champion): Kennen

Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It haven't got any votes for a while. I would like you to look at it :) And all publicity is good publicity.



What I'd like you to focus on: Item build. And general build "look" and "writing style".



Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kennen-the-off-tank-ninja-102793?page=1


kin333x wrote:

Probly the worst thing i have ever written... It was fun but painful
Beware me cause seisures


Guide For (champion): Nasus
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: BECAUSE ITS PRO
What I'd like you to focus on: THE PRONESS
Guide PRO NASUS GUIDE



Guide For: Rumble
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Some criticism and rune help
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-only-cute-on-the-outside-103558



Guide For: Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's my first guide and I'm the type of person that is never happy with my work so I always always try to fix things and it'd be nice to get another point of view on my guide
What I'd like you to focus on: Your first impression from just scrolling down the guide. The information. Does it look good? Does it keep you interested throughout the whole reading experience does it make you feel like I'm a reliable source of information for Wukong?
Guide Link: Click on my signature :)


Fakfejs wrote:

Guide For (champion): Kog'Maw
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: to improve its quality and insides ;]
What I'd like you to focus on: Overall, visuals, formatting and ofcourse idea of champion made that way
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kogmaw-as-ad-masacre-109665


Ikaax wrote:

Guide For (champion): Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: For check if i can improve some more things on it
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you can see
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-on-the-cloud-107787


Ragnarson wrote:

hey. just need some formatting stuff, but anything would be great!

Champion: Maokai
Why i'd Like this reviewed: using a new format/had previously unappealing guides
what i would like you to focus on: mainly the formating, though i will take any advice offered on the context of the build.

Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/maokai-the-devoted-partner-offtank-and-spell-pen-109962

thanks again! and awesome work so far!

Could also use some tips on just general build improvement

Champion: Gragas
Why i would like this reviewed:using new format/want to make sure my logic is sound
what i would like focused on: logic errors in build(runes and masteries)
Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gragas-hes-a-tank-109814


Lakapooty wrote:

Guide for: Olaf

Why I wanted you to review this: I got great criticism from JhoiJhoi on my first guide and I want to see if I got guide writing down this fast.

What I'd like to focus on: The format of the guide. It would also be FANTASTIC if you could try out the build in game to see if it works for other's, not just me.

Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/olaf-the-jungle-berserker-110047


Siveo wrote:

Guide For (champion): Shen
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide I've made and looking for some comments to make it even much better!
What I'd like you to focus on: Right items, masteries, runes, ... for my way of playing
Guide Link: Shen


deathalo44 wrote:

Guide for Amumu the Sad Mummy
Why I'll like this to be reviewed : I want to help more people :D And in the same time frame get some rep :P
What I'll like you to focus on : Dunno, anything you like :)
Guide link : In my descript, the Amumu one :D (The rest is also possible, but I didn't format them yet)


Bellator wrote:

Guide For (champion): Mordekaiser
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: General publicity that comes along with guides being reviewed on popular threads (What? At least I'm honest.) Also, always looking for opinions and criticism that can help improve my guide!
What I'd like you to focus on: Nothing in specific, skim it over, tell me what you like, tell me what you don't like. You know the drill, eh?
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/stranger-dangers-master-of-metal-100056


gwadzila wrote:

Guide For:Gragass
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want best guide on site!!!1!!
What I'd like you to focus on: writing within the guide, ability to understand
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gragas-the-jack-of-all-trades-86691


shamwoww wrote:

Guide for : Wukong
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: My first guide and no one has commented or voted :(
What I'd like you to focus on: Mostly item build but could you look at every thing else
Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-see-my-huge-stick-106428


2Much4Yoh wrote:

Guide For (champion):Rumble!
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:For constructive criticism,guidance,and an overall opinion XD.
What I'd like you to focus on:Mostly the organization and typical guide layout,but the actual build and stuff would be really nice.
Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-im-on-a-boat-110860


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I'd always appreciate more opinions on good old Amumu.

Guide For: Amumu
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: MOAR CRITICISM. MOAAARRRR
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's wrong or needs improvement. Feel free to be as harsh as you like.
Guide Link: Click on Knight Amumu in my signature.
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I need some more insight on my Nid guide, since I plan on re-releasing it.

Guide for: Nidalee
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Insight on anything that might help. Format, items, runes.
What I'd like you to focus on: All of it.
Guide Link: Link on my sig.
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No idea if I can handle more criticism after that bomb from Jhoi (lololol), but shoot.. Let's.

Guide for: Janna
Why I'd like this to be reviewed: More criticism = better guide.
What I'd like you to focus on: As always: My reasoning.
Guide link: Here
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Reviewing Next! :D


I'd always appreciate more opinions on good old Amumu.

Guide For: Amumu
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: MOAR CRITICISM. MOAAARRRR
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's wrong or needs improvement. Feel free to be as harsh as you like.
Guide Link: Click on Knight Amumu in my signature.


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Guide For: Malzahar
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Criticism. That way I can improve as a guide writer/player :P
What I'd like you to focus on: Is the information easy enough to follow? Are my explanations good enough for the people to understand? Also, are there any distractions (ex. colours, unnecessary humour attempts, things like that)
Guide Link: Clicky
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Guide For (champion): Vlad
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To improve it.
What I'd like you to focus on: All of it.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-blood-bank-the-post-nerfed-vladimir-resource-94933

Guide For (champion): Jarvan
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To improve it.
What I'd like you to focus on: All of it.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-exemplar-of-tanking-jarvan-iv-the-tank-y-dps-64686
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Jebus's review is done and up at the top (or in his guide).

Reviewing Next
Piksel4o wrote:

Guide For: Malzahar
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Criticism. That way I can improve as a guide writer/player :P
What I'd like you to focus on: Is the information easy enough to follow? Are my explanations good enough for the people to understand? Also, are there any distractions (ex. colours, unnecessary humour attempts, things like that)
Guide Link: Clicky


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