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Guide For (champion): Akali
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Anything jhoijhoi missed. (Don't mention a gameplay section though, I'm getting to that...)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's not right.
Guide Link: Akali: The Epitome of an Assassin.
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Anything jhoijhoi missed. (Don't mention a gameplay section though, I'm getting to that...)
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's not right.
Guide Link: Akali: The Epitome of an Assassin.
Guide For (champion): Wukong
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Wanna get your opinion
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything (maybe some sort of spelling check due english is not my mother tongue - nah. forget that one.)
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-u-no-steal-bananas-108211
Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Wanna get your opinion
What I'd like you to focus on: Anything (maybe some sort of spelling check due english is not my mother tongue - nah. forget that one.)
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-u-no-steal-bananas-108211

@Searz we wantz better guidessss
Nidalee - Olympic Gold Medalist Guide <-- Recently Updated

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lol I bet if I go away for 3 days ill come back and find another 100 guides for me to review :P
I've done like...2 so far...and...haven't even really started on the rest T_T.
Eh well. Guess i'll give up some LoL time, I get pissed enough anyways lol.
Edit: Nid guide for angel up at the front page.
I've done like...2 so far...and...haven't even really started on the rest T_T.
Eh well. Guess i'll give up some LoL time, I get pissed enough anyways lol.
Edit: Nid guide for angel up at the front page.
lol Nighthawk, I told you it'd be like that ^^ Which is why the freedom of popping in and out of my thread is all the other reviewers wanted :3
Didn't QUITE think it would be like this, all my other thread's i've created have completely failed within like a week lol.
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Reviewing Next!:
EDIT2: Scrax's guide is now up.
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Scrax wrote:
EDIT2: Scrax's guide is now up.
Nighthawk wrote:
Review for: th3BlackAngel

Constructive Criticism
- Skilling order. First of all, recommend you start with either W or E. Q doesn't really do tons of damage and a heal or a free ward is much more useful early.
- In any case you should take a point in w before level 4. It's incredibly useful.
- I can't understand what's with people and these runes. Ultimatum: Either get AP Quints + Seals/Glyphs or Mrp Marks + Quints. Unlike Harveys, you can't have it your way. :/ Mana regen is fine, flat cdr is ok but honestly you should ALWAYS go for per level as past level 6 they're tons better.
- you spelled magic as 'mafic' in the runes section.
- I would almost always get Guinsoo's on Nid. I would highly recommend it over your uhm...tome thingy I think it's called.
Verdict:
Uh well, that was short. Good explanations though. Perhaps expand a bit on laning/jungling with Nidalee, do's and dont's. Throw spear everywhere? Last hit with spear? Plant tons of bushwhacks in bush? Stay all the time in cougar form?
First of all, thanks for reviewing the guide, really appreceate it.
Now on to business:
- I know most people start with W or E for skills, but honestly, my guide is all about the spear. I understand the damage at level 1 is neglible, but so is the heal at level 1. What I try to do is put two points in
Javelin Toss / Takedown as early as possible because as I said in my guide, that is what I focus on.
- I know the usefulness of
Bushwhack / Pounce, but unless there is a threat from a strong jungler, I really see no issue with waiting 2 more minutes for it. Although I will try alternate skilling orders and possibly add these to the guide.
- i think the runes are great as is. MrP marks + flat AP quints for early spear poking, nothing wrong with that. As for CDR per level glyphs, it is only past level 13 that they overcome the flat CDR glyphs.
- Thanks, I usually never see these kind of small mistakes in spelling.
- It depends on who you're laning against. Guinsoo's is really an early game item for 1v1 and lane domination, but if you're up against someone who can own you 1v1, it is better to forgo it. I had my doubts about this and posted it in this forum, I think Jebus was the one who gave the decisive answer. I will remove Morello's from the core items, because I realize it is not necessarily a core item.
Again, thanks for the review. I will take everything you said into consideration.
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Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want more attention and +1's.
What I'd like you to focus on: How awesome the guide is.
Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shaco-ahueahueahue-86236