Reviews R'US: Will read your guide!

[quote=Nighthawk][center] [img]http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h380/thejhoijhoi/wallpaper-3.jpg[/img] Thanks to Jhoi for the EPIC wallpaper! +rep her if you can! :D [color=#D00C0C][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506?page=1]Read this before you post a guide![/url][/color] [color=#D00C0C][url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/what-people-look-for-in-a-guide-6167?page=1]And make sure to read this too! :D[/url][/color] [color=#ff0000]In this thread i'm only aiming to give guides some publicity. Around 600 guides [b]PER DAY[/b] are posted on Mobafire and not very many ever make it anywhere. Most of them don't even have any comments on them. I hope that by reviewing threads I can give some of those guides some publicity and open peoples eyes to them.[/color] [/center] In order to have your guide reviewed by me, use this format: [color=#008000]Guide For (champion): Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: What I'd like you to focus on: Guide Link:[/color] After you do that, i'll give you my review in this format on your own guide's comments: [b][color=yellow]A wild NIGHTHAWK appeared! Wild NIGHTHAWK used Review Guide![/color][/b] [color=#ff0000] Review for:[/color] Your name here [[Champion]] Guide [b][color=#ff0000]Constructive Criticism[/color][/b] [list] [*] Points of possible improvement [/list] [color=#ff0000]Verdict:[/color] Overall Thoughts on Guide. Head on down to [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/reviews-rus-will-read-your-guide-6949]My Review thread[/url] If you want to have some more comments on your build or if you want to discuss it some more :D I will also post in this thread about what I read in your guide in this format: [url=linktoyourguidehere]Name + Champion + Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: [center]What do I expect in return? Nothing, really. The only thing that would make me happy is some +rep. However I do this for you, not me :D If you also want a second opinion, you can head on down to [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/forum/build-and-guide-discussion/will-review-for-food-i-will-read-your-guide-6053?page=1]Jhoijhoi's Review thread[/url] [b]New rule! I will be ignoring all guide's where the user has less then 100 posts until I get back on track with my reviews![/b] (^ means i'll get to yours after I do the rest) [/center][/quote]

[quote=Nighthawk][color=yellow]Reserved for Verdicts of Guides![/color] [center] [[Akali]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shadow-killer-on-duty-85584]AngelPixe's Akali Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Good guide, good build. Pretty good explanations too. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Runes, Masteries and grammatical and spelling errors :D __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Amumu]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/amumu-wrapping-up-the-jungle-37186?page=1]Jebus Mcazn's Amumu Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Extremely good guide with tons of detail. Probably the best tanking guide for Amumu on the site. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Runes and masteries feel the need to be a bit better, also appears to have a huge wall of text at points which can turn the reader off. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Ashe]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ashes-to-ashes-67331]Jhoijhoi's Ashe Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Real pro guide, nice mix of damage and survivability + great explanation. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Masteries, Runes, maybe some item changes too. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Janna]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-a-harmless-breeze-for-competitive-ranked-play-87766]Scrax's Janna Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Def a good guide, nice humour, nice explanations, hot chick. It's all there. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Maybe use images a bit more? Items are a bit to healthy lol, imo you need either some AP for your shield or some more tankiness. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Jarvan IV]] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-exemplar-of-tanking-jarvan-iv-the-tank-y-dps-64686]Sacull_Kinslayer Jarvan IV Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Very good guide, nice explanations, nice format. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Jungle Jarvan > Lane Jarvan. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Malzahar]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malzahar-come-mortal-witness-your-demise-103561]Piksel4o's Malzahar Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: A very good guide with a lot of good things to it. Explain's pretty well too. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Runes should probs be fixed. IMO DFG would fit in well. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Master Yi]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/master-jungler-100462] Palzm's Master Yi Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Good guide. Short and sweet. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Items, explanations. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Nidalee]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nidalee-olympic-gold-medalist-javelin-toss-97712] th3BlackAngel's Nidalee Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Good guide. Items/Runes imo could be a bit better, however explanations are good. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Feels a bit short tbh. Lengthen up the explanations and it'll be good I imagine. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Soraka]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ap-soraka-no-my-horn-doesnt-poke-through-my-deathcap-104646]The_Nameless_Bard's Soraka Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Good guide for an AP/Tank/Support Soraka. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Items, runes, masteries. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [[Vladimir]] __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-blood-bank-a-post-nerf-vladimir-resource-94933] Sacull_Kinslayer's Vladimir Guide[/url] [color=#ff0000]Verdict[/color]: Good guide. Some nice insight into Vlad. [color=#008000]Possible Improvements[/color]: Items and runes is about it.[/quote]

[quote=Nighthawk]Reserved in case anyone else wants to review guides here! :D Also: [b][color=yellow]Guides I still need to review:[/color][/b] [quote=VKZ95] Guide for: [[Mordekaiser]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want to know what experienced players think of my guide What I'd like you to focus on: items (what could be changed) Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ap-spell-vamp-morde-105999]Mordekaiser[/url] [/quote] [quote=ChefoSLR] [color=#ffff00]Champion Guide for:[/color] Leona [color=#808000]Reasons why I want you to review it:[/color] I think it's a very in-depth guide on Leona, I worked on it for 4 days. If I can get some comments from a real pro, that would be great. =) [color=#ff8000]Things I want you to focus on:[/color] My choice for masteries and runes and whether my explanations are good enough for everyone to understand. [color=#ff0000]Link:[/color] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leona-bloodstained-light-updated-107137]Leona, Bloodstained Light (Updated)[/url] [/quote] [quote=palzm] Guide For: Kassadin Why: to improve. getting no attention either :O What I'd like you to focus on: All of it Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/void-ninja-104144 [/quote] [quote=RosePhoenix] Guide For : Nocturne Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'd like some feedback from pros. What I'd like you to focus on: Build order, format of the guide, what i should add, etc. Pretty much just anything I can change in it. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/fedturne-that-dark-thing-in-the-jungle-107889 [/quote] [quote=Keels] Guide for: Singed. Why I want it reviewed: I think I finally have all my coding down. I learned what /center meant, a criticism of my renekton guide. So tell me if I've reached the mountaintop, because that's probably gonna be my last guide. Do I need more humor? Videos? Results? Graphs(I hate making graphs)? [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/singed-his-chemical-romance-ap-hp-mpen-99768]Buh[/url] [/quote] [quote=Aharan] Guide for: [[Corki]] Why: To help make it better, also I love criticism, helps me make things better. What'd I like you to focus on: Is it aesthetically appealing? Can I liven things up? (P.S I already asked Jhoijhoi to review it, and she has, but I would like more then one opinion) Guide link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/corki-insert-creative-name-here-90103 [/quote] [quote=xIPainIx] Guide For (champion): Wukong Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: i'd like to know what i could add to make it better :) What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you think can be added or changed. Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-that-funky-monkey-detailed-guide-106047 Thanks in advance [/quote] [quote=ShadowNet] Guide for (champion): Mordekaiser Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To help me improve it. I need some good criticism. What I'd like you to focus on: Everything. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/carry-me-morde-108278?page=1 [/quote] [quote=Dante Rebellion] Guide for (champion): Shaco Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want more attention and +1's. What I'd like you to focus on: How awesome the guide is. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shaco-ahueahueahue-86236 [/quote] [quote=Bryun] Guide For (champion): Akali Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Anything jhoijhoi missed. (Don't mention a gameplay section though, I'm getting to that...) What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's not right. Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/akali-the-epitome-of-an-assassin-80578][color=#808000]Akali: The Epitome of an Assassin.[/color][/url] [/quote] [quote=Xiron] Guide For (champion): Wukong Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Wanna get your opinion What I'd like you to focus on: Anything (maybe some sort of spelling check due english is not my mother tongue - nah. forget that one.) Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-u-no-steal-bananas-108211 [/quote] [quote=guiken] Hi this is my first attempt (Although trying to be extremely competent and thorough in execution) To write a MobaFire Guide. I've chosen Leona since I've played her constantly, every day since her release. Guide For (champion): Leona Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I am always looking for ways to improve the information presented to really create a valuable resource for the community not just an opinion based build. What I'd like you to focus on: The usefulness of the information presented, any errors/omissions and any further improvements in readability. Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/leona-try-to-leave-a-dent-full-guide-102432]Leona: Try to leave a Dent! [Full Guide][/url] [/quote] [quote=Delandel] Guide For (champion): [[Lee Sin]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide, poor ratings, unsure of what to improve. What I'd like you to focus on: Anything Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lee-sin-done-right-videos-included-108880 [/quote] [quote=CryMoarHoar] Guide For : Cassiopeia Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I'd like the constructive criticism (I haven't written too many guides, but I really think this one is decent.) What I'd like you to focus on: All of it :D Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/cassiopeia-spamming-is-required-109390 Guide For : Janna Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see if people think it's viable. What I'd like you to focus on: All of it :D Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-harmless-breeze-my-ass-108097 [/quote] [quote=Whated] Guide For (champion): Kennen Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It haven't got any votes for a while. I would like you to look at it :) And all publicity is good publicity. What I'd like you to focus on: Item build. And general build "look" and "writing style". Guide Link: [url]http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kennen-the-off-tank-ninja-102793?page=1[/url] [/quote] [quote=kin333x] Probly the worst thing i have ever written... It was fun but painful Beware me cause seisures Guide For (champion): Nasus Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: BECAUSE ITS PRO What I'd like you to focus on: THE PRONESS Guide [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/pro-nasus-guide-109600]PRO NASUS GUIDE[/url] [/quote] [quote=ShadowReign757] Guide For: Rumble Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Some criticism and rune help What I'd like you to focus on: Anything Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-only-cute-on-the-outside-103558 [/quote] [quote=InfamousJoker] Guide For: Wukong Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: It's my first guide and I'm the type of person that is never happy with my work so I always always try to fix things and it'd be nice to get another point of view on my guide What I'd like you to focus on: Your first impression from just scrolling down the guide. The information. Does it look good? Does it keep you interested throughout the whole reading experience does it make you feel like I'm a reliable source of information for Wukong? Guide Link: Click on my signature :) [/quote] [quote=Fakfejs] Guide For (champion): Kog'Maw Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: to improve its quality and insides ;] What I'd like you to focus on: Overall, visuals, formatting and ofcourse idea of champion made that way Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kogmaw-as-ad-masacre-109665 [/quote] [quote=Ikaax] Guide For (champion): Wukong Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: For check if i can improve some more things on it What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you can see Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-on-the-cloud-107787 [/quote] [quote=Ragnarson] hey. just need some formatting stuff, but anything would be great! Champion: Maokai Why i'd Like this reviewed: using a new format/had previously unappealing guides what i would like you to focus on: mainly the formating, though i will take any advice offered on the context of the build. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/maokai-the-devoted-partner-offtank-and-spell-pen-109962 thanks again! and awesome work so far! Could also use some tips on just general build improvement Champion: Gragas Why i would like this reviewed:using new format/want to make sure my logic is sound what i would like focused on: logic errors in build(runes and masteries) Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gragas-hes-a-tank-109814 [/quote] [quote=Lakapooty] Guide for: Olaf Why I wanted you to review this: I got great criticism from JhoiJhoi on my first guide and I want to see if I got guide writing down this fast. What I'd like to focus on: The format of the guide. It would also be FANTASTIC if you could try out the build in game to see if it works for other's, not just me. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/olaf-the-jungle-berserker-110047 [/quote] [quote=Siveo] Guide For (champion): Shen Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: First guide I've made and looking for some comments to make it even much better! What I'd like you to focus on: Right items, masteries, runes, ... for my way of playing Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/dont-mess-with-the-shen-98615]Shen[/url] [/quote] [quote=deathalo44] Guide for Amumu the Sad Mummy Why I'll like this to be reviewed : I want to help more people :D And in the same time frame get some rep :P What I'll like you to focus on : Dunno, anything you like :) Guide link : In my descript, the Amumu one :D (The rest is also possible, but I didn't format them yet) [/quote] [quote=Bellator] Guide For (champion): [[Mordekaiser]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: General publicity that comes along with guides being reviewed on popular threads (What? At least I'm honest.) Also, always looking for opinions and criticism that can help improve my guide! What I'd like you to focus on: Nothing in specific, skim it over, tell me what you like, tell me what you don't like. You know the drill, eh? Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/stranger-dangers-master-of-metal-100056 [/quote] [quote=gwadzila] Guide For:Gragass Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I want best guide on site!!!1!! What I'd like you to focus on: writing within the guide, ability to understand Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/gragas-the-jack-of-all-trades-86691 [/quote] [quote=shamwoww] Guide for : Wukong Why I'd like this to be reviewed: My first guide and no one has commented or voted :( What I'd like you to focus on: Mostly item build but could you look at every thing else Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/wukong-see-my-huge-stick-106428 [/quote] [quote=2Much4Yoh] Guide For (champion):Rumble! Why I'd like this to be Reviewed:For constructive criticism,guidance,and an overall opinion XD. What I'd like you to focus on:Mostly the organization and typical guide layout,but the actual build and stuff would be really nice. Guide Link:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/rumble-im-on-a-boat-110860 [/quote][/quote]

[quote=Jebus McAzn]I'd always appreciate more opinions on good old Amumu. Guide For: Amumu Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: MOAR CRITICISM. MOAAARRRR What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's wrong or needs improvement. Feel free to be as harsh as you like. Guide Link: Click on Knight Amumu in my signature.[/quote]

[quote=th3BlackAngel]I need some more insight on my Nid guide, since I plan on re-releasing it. Guide for: Nidalee Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Insight on anything that might help. Format, items, runes. What I'd like you to focus on: All of it. Guide Link: Link on my sig.[/quote]

[quote=Scrax]No idea if I can handle more criticism after that bomb from Jhoi (lololol), but shoot.. Let's. Guide for: [[Janna]] Why I'd like this to be reviewed: More criticism = better guide. What I'd like you to focus on: As always: My reasoning. Guide link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/janna-a-harmless-breeze-for-competitive-ranked-play-87766]Here[/url][/quote]

[quote=Nighthawk][color=yellow]Reviewing Next! :D[/color] [quote=Jebus McAzn] I'd always appreciate more opinions on good old Amumu. Guide For: Amumu Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: MOAR CRITICISM. MOAAARRRR What I'd like you to focus on: Anything that's wrong or needs improvement. Feel free to be as harsh as you like. Guide Link: Click on Knight Amumu in my signature. [/quote][/quote]

[quote=Piksel4o]Guide For: [[Malzahar]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Criticism. That way I can improve as a guide writer/player :P What I'd like you to focus on: Is the information easy enough to follow? Are my explanations good enough for the people to understand? Also, are there any distractions (ex. colours, unnecessary humour attempts, things like that) Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malzahar-come-mortal-witness-your-demise-103561]Clicky[/url][/quote]

[quote=Sacull_Kinslayer]Guide For (champion): Vlad Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To improve it. What I'd like you to focus on: All of it. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-blood-bank-the-post-nerfed-vladimir-resource-94933 Guide For (champion): Jarvan Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To improve it. What I'd like you to focus on: All of it. Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-exemplar-of-tanking-jarvan-iv-the-tank-y-dps-64686[/quote]

[quote=Nighthawk]Jebus's review is done and up at the top (or in his guide). [color=yellow]Reviewing Next[/color] [quote=Piksel4o] Guide For: [[Malzahar]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: Criticism. That way I can improve as a guide writer/player :P What I'd like you to focus on: Is the information easy enough to follow? Are my explanations good enough for the people to understand? Also, are there any distractions (ex. colours, unnecessary humour attempts, things like that) Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/malzahar-come-mortal-witness-your-demise-103561]Clicky[/url] [/quote][/quote]