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Creator: albableat May 6, 2012 8:25pm
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I'm sorry, but at the moment I'm very busy, so the review shop is temporarily closed =\





I figured out that since I'm a scout now, I should probably do the darn job... So, here we are, I'm here to serve you, people :)


So, what's a deal?


Pretty simple. Like with any other review shop. You make sure to match my acceptance criteria, give me the link to your guide, I actually read it and give you the feedback. Depending on the quality of your guide, I can just respond/upvote/+scout. I won't downvote right off the bat, just because you messed up at first. Everyone deserves a chance.

Let's make the request form simple :)

Your name (IGN/moba name/real name, whatever), so that I can address you the way you prefer :)
Link to your guide. One at a time, please.
Any specific points that I should look at?

What do I expect?

  • You being level 30. Or lying to me about being level 30... I don't care, to be honest, but I'll probably be able to see if you are not 30 just by the way you write your guide ;)
  • Some post count... This isn't just to torture you. If you want someone from the community to help you, you should help the community too, right?
  • Some presence of neat layout. NOTE, it doesn't have to be an exemplary level BBcoding. If you just keep your info organized, it's good with me!
  • English language. Although I know Russian and some Spanish/German, I doubt that the community would love to read the guide in anything but English :D
    Also, "This es mai 1rst gaid. PLZ RATE UP AND +REP ME" is a joke. Run a spellcheck if English isn't your native language.

What do you get out of it?

  • Of course, a response from me. I'm gonna use everything to reward you for a good guide (upvote,+scout, +rep), it all depends on how good it is.
  • I'm not going to use a mysterious x/10 system for evaluation as I think it isn't a very accurate method. I'll be much more general and will rate your pre-game setup, itemization, playstyle explanations, tips&tricks and whatever custom sections you might have. You won't get a grade, but I will give my overall impression in a paragraph or so as a summary. I'll also list what did I reward you with :)
  • If I really like the guide, I'll share it with other prominent mobafire members (ESPECIALLY, if they are better then me at the champion in question). So, you might get their reactions as well :)
  • If I really reaaaaaallly like your guide, I'll offer you a signature/banner for the guide! :)

What do I review?


I don't want to start out with huge promises, so I'll limit it to champion guides for now :)

I specialize at middle lane gaming (not only AP, but midlane in general).
Personally, I love playing supports the most. For that reason, I have a pretty good understanding of AD carry gameplay since I'm side-by-side with them a lot of time :)
I play jungle and top occasionally. I'm not amazing at either of them on practice, but I have a pretty good theory knowledge from watching my friends&streamers play, so I'll be able to give you a sound response on those as well.

How much will I review?


I'm currently in college and I'm just about to be done with my finals, so atm I don't promise a ton of reviews.
2-5 guides per day would be my approximation (considering medium length well-written guides)
Not foreswearing for now, after all it's my first attempt on running a review shop :)

Thanks :)


If you want to thank me, just say it :)
If you really want to thank me, click dat +rep (although I personally don't worry if you don't :D)
If you reallly reallllly want to thank me, make me a nice looking LeBlanc sig =P I'd love that!

So, how does that sound? Deal? :)

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Below is a list of "featured guides" aka the guides that I scouted.



Want to see an in-depth diamond level LeBlanc guide? Come by and check this ;) It's written by Baekstra who is a Diamond LeBlanc main on EUW and being one myself, I can vouch for it 100%!
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Woohoo first :D

Your name: BluAnimal or Matt

Link to your guide. http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/twisted-treeline-jax-updated-4-19-114697?page=1

Any specific points that I should look at? The counters list and just to make sure the text information sounds somewhat detailed/knowledgeable. Also if there's any scary walls of text that need to be broken down.
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Alrighty, Ala, go look at my lux guidde please! My Name is Sammy or Arcana you should konw >.< And my Link is in my sig below :D, I would like to know if there is something I missed or if there is something add :3
Thanks to everyone that has made me a sig!

Lacorpse JhoiJhoi Missmaw Xiron Xiao Kat CM Nameless Tinystar Me

Feel Free to +rep if I helped you out
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@Arcana

Will get to it today :) Promise.
Want to see an in-depth diamond level LeBlanc guide? Come by and check this ;) It's written by Baekstra who is a Diamond LeBlanc main on EUW and being one myself, I can vouch for it 100%!
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Also, would you guys like me to create a list of reviewed guides? Like many other people do?

I don't feel that's really necessary. And I'll be featuring some guides, definitely, but I just wonder if I need to display all of them?
Want to see an in-depth diamond level LeBlanc guide? Come by and check this ;) It's written by Baekstra who is a Diamond LeBlanc main on EUW and being one myself, I can vouch for it 100%!
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You should add the guides you gave a Scout Point to most certainly. It should be a reference for other random people to check those out!
I have a list of reviewed guides but that is mostly because I like to keep track of how many I did :P

Btw your sig is broken. Fix it ^^

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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Creamy, I just spent 15 minutes randomly doing "chemistry" with my sigs :D

Seems all right now, doesn't it?
Want to see an in-depth diamond level LeBlanc guide? Come by and check this ;) It's written by Baekstra who is a Diamond LeBlanc main on EUW and being one myself, I can vouch for it 100%!
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Great indeed :)

Err, how about we trade reviews, you review all my guides and I review all of yours? ;D

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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All of your champ guides, k?

Because I'm 100% n00b in using coloumns and I already commented on your General Game guide ;)


No need to review my Vayne guide, it's a humourous build. Only in case you want to have some fun with it =P
Want to see an in-depth diamond level LeBlanc guide? Come by and check this ;) It's written by Baekstra who is a Diamond LeBlanc main on EUW and being one myself, I can vouch for it 100%!
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Haha are you serious, I was trolling a bit (1v4 is rather unfair right? xD). But hey if you are okay with that, I am not stopping you :)

Will surely look at your Vayne guide as well because hey, I like a joke :P

And you were going to request a review for your LeBlanc guide on my review shop anyways so I will add it there!

DuffTime wrote:
ok ok plz carry me omg
i was only waiting for you to ask

Temzilla wrote:
Too hot to be icecream.

Luther3000 wrote:
He looks like a hair gel advert on legs

Toshabi wrote:
Icecreamy, with hair as slick and smooth as the ocean waves of Cocobana
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