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Creator: JEFFY40HANDS January 7, 2012 11:50am
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Hue, thanks! ^^
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I was looking around on my computer, found this unfinished piece, and figured I'd try and put some more work into it, I've cleaned it up a bit, not sure what I'm going to do next, but I'll figure something out.

Thanks to DuskToGlory for the sigs. LOL :)

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interesting, kinda awkward placement of the c4ds tho...looks like they are coming out of his stomach and making him scream.

Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
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hahaha, yeah. I've been experimenting on the placement of the c4d's, like where the c4d on the right lines up with his shoulder. I may look at some tutorials for inspiration as well.

Thanks to DuskToGlory for the sigs. LOL :)

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It's a render smushed into some C4Ds.

The flow is heavily displaced.
There is no real sense of depth.
It looks very bland.
Needs some additional colors to make it pop.
Youve hidden the render far too much. As in he's just a head and a torso, which is rather boring.
I realize youre still learning (or i assume you are)

Id rate it 4 out of 10.

I'd recommend you stopping by deviantart.com and looking up some tutorials.

Sorry if i was rather harsh, but if no one gives you a blunt opinion youre never going to try and improve.

I am by no means "the greatest tagger" ever so take what i said however you want.
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lol, I don't mind getting my *** kicked when it comes to criticism.

I kind of stopped halfway through the learning process, and then didn't really do anything with it afterwards, so it's only natural that it's nothing special. also it's a rather old attempt back when I thought slapping a c4d on a render over a a plain background was "good".

This is the first time in a while where I have participated in a forum that allows signatures, and seeing all the goodwork others do on this forum has kind of inspired me to take another crack at it.

Constructive criticism is always appreciated on anything I do, no matter how harsh.

Thanks to DuskToGlory for the sigs. LOL :)

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Well i'd prefer "honest" critiques to "harsh". Sometimes they can be one in the same, but my thought process is to be as nice as possible when delivering positive or negative feedback. Keep at it and youll get better. Ill try to improve my critiques, rather keep them as friendly and honest as i used to.
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good guy dusk :D

Thanks to TRUeLM, Plastictree, Scrax, Xiaowiriamu, foggy12, JahGFX, jhoijhoi, msrobinson, JEFFY40HANDS, Nyoike, MissMaw, and me :) for the sigs!
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Just did some work based around the Zyra splash. Very cool piece of art.




IGN: Stíng (EUW)
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2 weeks off...@_@ Tried something different, no idea how to do this style, but I figured I'd experiment with it.

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