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Creator: pepsiM4A1 October 3, 2012 12:30pm
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bsurma wrote:

Summoner Level: 30

Server: EUNE

Champion: Darius

Have I reviewed this guide before?: No

Anything I should know?: No, not really. I just need more opinions on my guide.

Link to guide: Here.

Really nice guide(love the line dividers^^), a detailed guide, and full of images that help you to understand faster.
You don't really have detailed match-ups, I can tell you, they can be more detailed. At the first look, I tought they were made in a hurry.
And about Fiora, I played her for a long time and I tell you, a good Fiora player won't **** up fighting Darius since after Burst of Speed, her AS is getting lower, and since Burst of Speed has a short duration(I think it has a short duration), she knows she will get really ****** after it.
AND Shen MUST BE AT HARD, NOT AT MEDIUM!!!!
He really fits in every team composition and tha is what makes him OP. You can't stop his Stand United and if you think you have enough damage, know that a Shen builds a lot of armor and health and Feint absorbs a good amount of damage....
Other from that, you have a nice guide and you deserve +1!
Sorry, you waited a lot but I couldn't find time to review guides:-(
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Sujing wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Maokai
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No.
Anything I should know?: Thank you for taking the time to look at my guide!
Link to guide: Here you go.

I don't understand why you get Rod of Ages since it provides you AP and less health then a lot of items. Late game, you will be your team's tank so losing tankiness for a little bit of damage output is really bad I think.
I saw a lot of Maokai in tournaments and, you should take Phil. Stone-> Boots-> Heart of Gold. And about the boots, I see Maokai players take Mobility Boots more often then Mercury's Treads since faster ganks are much better.
Just finish the Jungle match-ups and other from that, it is a good guide. You deserve a +1!
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Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Gangplank
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: No
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/competitive-solo-top-gangplank-250716

Finally, a champion that I enjoy playing a lot!
You are right on your build, but I go a little offensive. You build TankPlank when I build CritPlank. You say, don't get kills, why?
You are useless late game and the Teleport is nearly a MUST HAVE on Gangplank. You take 2 GP5 to replace the need of killing somebody but still if you have the chance, go for it!
And usually, instead of Trinity Force, I go Bloodthirster so I have a little bit of sustain. I know you can eat oranges but still some damage and sustain without MANA is clearly good.
YOU HAVE A REALLY GOOD GUIDE, I AM GONNA TRY IT OUT!!!
+1 my friend!
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Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Riven
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: It is my first guide, but don't go easy. I want to criticism to help me make better guides
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-the-exile-253420
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Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Riven
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: It is my first guide, but don't go easy. I want to criticism to help me make better guides
Link to guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/riven-the-exile-253420

Good guide but a meh build:
If you do an early Bloodthirster indeed you will be powerfull but very vulnerable, but if you invest in an early Frozen Mallet, not only that you will deal damage but you will be more safe and you would win trades. Riven counters Jax however, if you take a Bloodthirster first, you will have really little health and you he will deny all your farm and kills.
I don't find Maw of Malmortius an item that you must always have. By the way, solve the thing in the item section, the icon of Maw of Malmortius can't be seen. You must take this item if you have problem against MD. If you don't have that kind of problems, then it is pretty useless...
Me myself, don't find Wriggle's Lantern a necessary item for jungle Riven since she has a good clearing speed. I reccomend you buy a Vampiric Scepter and leave it there until you want to build a Bloodthirster...
+1, but I will come to check what new things you have done and my vote will change in that way. And, sorry I made you wait a lot but I couldn't find time to check it since school kills me.
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Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Fiddlesticks
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: Yeah, plz look at this
Link to guide: Fiddlesticks - The Master of Crows (A mean In-Depth guide)
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Summoner Level:30
Server:EUW
Champion:Twisted Fate
Have I reviewed this guide before?:Nope
Anything I should know?:umm,i'm not sure o.0
Link to guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-to-tango-with-tf-252624

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Summoner Level:30
Server:EUW
Champion: Amumu
Have I reviewed this guide before?:Nope, just created it.
Anything I should know?:I can take constructive criticism
Link to guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/amumu-dealing-bandadges-since-2009-255844
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The one with Riven was done by me :)
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Slaydis wrote:

Summoner Level: 30
Server: NA
Champion: Fiddlesticks
Have I reviewed this guide before?: No
Anything I should know?: Yeah, plz look at this
Link to guide: Fiddlesticks - The Master of Crows (A mean In-Depth guide)

I love your build, explanations and all the stuff, and I read the thing you told me and yeah, it doesn't look aesthetic and I am sure it is because of the bug.
Everything was good until I reached the match-ups.
Talon wins without any problem against Fiddlesticks, I assure you since I am a Talon player myself. You just use your silence and then Bountiful Harvest, what happens?
You die in a couple of seconds thanks to cutthroat silence, Rake and the insane bleeding from Noxian Diplomacy. He can stop your Crowstorm channeling and if he is in a nasty situation, he can use his Shadow Assault.
Galio too, he is a champion that naturally builds MR so your damage output is really low on him and that means it is harder for you to kill him and his shield is really effective against you. He has a ****ing annoying harras with Resolute Smite and he may force you out and since he usually builds Chalice of Harmony, he won't have as much mana issues as a Fiddlesticks would have.
The rest, as I said before is perfect, and that's why I voted(+1). Sorry for making you wait that much but school is keeping me busy all the time.
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Summoner Level:30
Server:EUW
Champion:Twisted Fate
Have I reviewed this guide before?:Nope
Anything I should know?:umm,i'm not sure o.0
Link to guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-to-tango-with-tf-252624

I can't vote on this, but I think I upvoted but didn't comment.
You are a better player then me, you should review my guides, I respect you for being a better player then me but, please make some detailed match-ups and give people tips to either survive or to pick up some kills. Nothing to say, I am so sorry.
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