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[quote=Gott der 7 Meere]Summoner Name: Gott der 7 Meere Guide: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/lt-gt-long-distance-supporting-lt-gt-214316]Support Lux[/url] Why: Improving it and getting it to the top quides again.[/quote]

[quote=oxide110]Link to the guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/how-to-tango-with-tf-252624 Summoner name:Oxide Anything special I should know:Nope Thanks in advance for your time. :)[/quote]

[quote=FalseoGod][quote=astrolia] [quote=FalseoGod] Oh hi. Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kayle-hybrid-build-comprehensive-guide-195289]Kayle[/url] Anything special?: I added the AD and Jungler chapters recently (because hybrid really isn't competitive viable vs those routes), and your thoughts on those two additions will be greatly appreciated [/quote] Here's your review: [spoiler]I don't have too many recommendations for the content of your guide. Admittedly I don't have that much experience with Kayle (especially hybrid and jungle Kayle), but your AD build seems a-okay with me. You also make very good suggestions like saying to build based on the enemy team, to take wolves or double golems if your lane is pushed, and to play as a team. My biggest problem with your guide is the presentation aspect of it. There's tons of inconsistency in how it's formatted. For example, in your "Skills" section, your passive, Q and W are left aligned, while the rest of the section is center aligned. You also have inconsistent spacing between lines. Sometimes the next paragraph begins with a one line break, and other times it's a several line break. Here are a few other examples: http://puu.sh/19KN6 - Your pros and cons are not aligned correctly. http://puu.sh/19KOg - You have random [/i] tags in a few of your matchups. http://puu.sh/19KP3 - Another area where your sections do not align properly. http://puu.sh/19KVp http://puu.sh/19KWN - Some items are larger than others for no apparent reason. http://puu.sh/19KY0 - Typo on the item. http://puu.sh/19KPX - Seemingly random use of coloring text. This list isn't exhaustive, so there may/probably are other areas that could be improved. I would suggest reading over your guide and paying particular attention to similar things. A well formatted guide will help keep the readers attention and make it look more professional. Overall pretty good. Just make it look a bit better :>. [/spoiler] [/quote] Ooops, didn't remember to come back here :$ Ugh, I'll see what I can do about those. I'm kinda lazy on the presentation side when it comes to my guides and I shouldn't be. Imma get on this later, thanks a lot![/quote]

[quote=F3ar0ner]Hi! Link to the guide: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/akali-the-shadow-assassin-234219]Here[/url] Summoner name: F3ar0ner Anything special I should know: First Guide[/quote]

[quote=morrkevi]Link to the guide: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-the-accomplished-etwahlist-aggressive-support-guide-265876 Summoner name: morrkevi Anything special I should know: This is my first champion guide![/quote]

[quote=Pølsemanden]Link to the guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/p-lses-ballz-to-the-wallz-top-kennen-245370 Summoner name:Pølsêmanden Anything special I should know:i'd like a vote after you're done if possible.[/quote]

[quote=astrolia][quote=Pølsemanden] Link to the guide:http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/p-lses-ballz-to-the-wallz-top-kennen-245370 Summoner name:Pølsêmanden Anything special I should know:i'd like a vote after you're done if possible. [/quote] Here is your review: "It's like I'm looking at some high school English project where the kid only focused on one section (match ups) and images/graphics/appearance, then ignored the rest of the content, and didn't bother to fix his writing."[/quote]

[quote=Pølsemanden]enlighten me, what is missing?[/quote]

[quote=astrolia]- Basic explanations for less knowledgeable players. Like it or not, the majority of the viewers on this site are like 2 ELO. E.g. one of the people who upvoted you thinks you should explain taking [[Doran's Blade]]. I'm actually surprised you explained the whole "under enemy's tower" thing instead of just saying "reset the damn lane." - Spelling/grammar/etc. "if you have another AP on the team that gets a lot of help from SV a great example would be ryze, then this item wraps it up for you." "[[Thundering Shuriken]]'s" "comming with input" "The reason i'm not too fond of this item is that your usefulness without your ulty isn't really that useful" "3 positions where u want your minions to be placed" "Polses" Btw, a few months ago when I made my MF guide, you and Temzilla commented to double team on me and say that crit chance stacks for every crit you don't make. I replied asking you for a source, since Xyph (the person who made the current crit system) said otherwise. Are you able to provide a source or no? It's pretty important for the ad carry role.[/quote]

[quote=Pølsemanden]I'm not a native english speaker so i don't see what's wrong with nr 1 and 4 :o[/quote]