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The review shop is currently closed while I'm on winter break and catching up on requested reviews.




Hello, I'm a 1900 elo AP, AD and support player. I'm opening a Review Shop for people to get their AD, AP or supports guides reviewed and hopefully improved.

What do you get out of it?
You get an experienced, platinum level player to review your guide. I may review anything ranging from the League content, spelling and grammar, and the visual presentation of the guide.

Things to understand before I review
1) I will review with the current meta in mind.
2) I'm only looking to review AD, AP or support guides, as they are what I'm more experienced with, and I believe you should review for what you're experienced with instead of just everything that's thrown your way.
3) If you would really like me to, I can certainly look over your top lane or jungler guide for non-content topics, but neither is my forte.
4) I do not believe in "match up"-type sections, and if your guide has an extensive match up section, I will probably not comment much on it. I believe match ups are very environment, situational, and also heavily based on personal experience. A jungler, in example, can help a lane that "should be" losing win.
5) As this is for peer review and improvement, I might not vote on your guide!

What do you need to do for your guide to be reviewed?
1) Please be level 30
2) Please do not recommend starting Doran's or using Clarity

If you've passed these two easy steps, then simply post the following information in this thread and I'll put your review in queue!
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Summoner name:
Anything special I should know:

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hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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I'll be first~

It's ok if I use Clarity on jungle Shyvana right? :DDD

Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shyvana-jungle-thief-192406

Anything special you should know?: Not really, just looking for a general review/viability check.
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Oh hi.

Link: Kayle

Anything special?: I added the AD and Jungler chapters recently (because hybrid really isn't competitive viable vs those routes), and your thoughts on those two additions will be greatly appreciated
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Great initiative :) +rep. Maybe I'll submit my guides for review, totally willing to overhaul them if there's some glaring error ^^

glhf with requests!
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tehAsian wrote:

I'll be first~

It's ok if I use Clarity on jungle Shyvana right? :DDD

Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/shyvana-jungle-thief-192406

Anything special you should know?: Not really, just looking for a general review/viability check.

Here's your review!

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jhoijhoi wrote:

Great initiative :) +rep. Maybe I'll submit my guides for review, totally willing to overhaul them if there's some glaring error ^^

glhf with requests!

Thanks. :)
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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Thanks Astrolia :)

Although, should I post my reply here or in a PM?
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As you haven't played her in 23 days, I would suggest playing a couple games as her before you do anything, honestly. ^^; Not even trying to be mean or offensive.
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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Wat o_o

zzz nothing happens in 23 days, there wasn't like a meta shift or anything :V

Also, what website is that? I wanna use :3
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Well, I suggested you try playing her again because you haven't played her for a while and I think you need a different perspective on things. Maybe you learned something from what I said, maybe I was completely wrong about something; who knows. If we build the same way over and over and use the same summoners over and over, we really get into a rut. When my Syndra guide came out, some other guide was seriously suggesting taking Ghost and building Eleisa's Miracle. It was dumb, but I actually did it. I also tried the Rod of Ages build. I favor a "hands on" and "experience" approach to things (which is also why I don't really want to review top or jungler guides - not as experienced).
hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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FalseoGod wrote:

Oh hi.

Link: Kayle

Anything special?: I added the AD and Jungler chapters recently (because hybrid really isn't competitive viable vs those routes), and your thoughts on those two additions will be greatly appreciated


Here's your review:

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hi embracing. yes i play ff14 now.
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