Ok, so an update on this. One, get rid of the Champion Spotlight section and Lore. They are fillers. The Champion Spotlight is only useful in a relevant section, and should not have a whole section to itself.

Archangel's Staff and Rylai's Crystal Scepter are both not viable, and you have failed to include Athene's Unholy Grail, which is pretty much a core item.

You need much better explanations, and explanations for everything. This only tells "what" not "why."

More coding. Need more coding.

You use Ignite & Flash (and Exhaust & Teleport as alternative ones), but do not put mastery points in Summoner's Wrath and Summoner's Insight - why?
Better to have +1% cooldown reduction and +0.66% movement speed out of combat than +5 attack damage and +5 ability power periodically and -15sec cooldown on Flash?

oooh... ok... learned something again. hehehe thanks.

Linking guides is fine, advertising own guides is against the rules (fine to have a link in your sig like 'check out my ashe guide' and similar)

Against policy for advertisement of self-promotion/promotion of others (being "Vote this, check this out, likey guide, etc.")

I don't believe anyone is going to get upset that I linked a Guide on how to make guides to a new guide writer in order to help with their guide. (How many times can I say guide lol)

Hmm.. It's against site policy to hyperlink a guide at comment.

Actually, with BBCoding, you CAN link guides to other people. Simply take the URL of the guide, hit that link button, and paste it in there. Then type whatever you want for the name of the link. Here's that guide :D

Jhoijhoi's Guide to Making Guides

P.S. Unless you were referring to the advertising rules, in which case I do believe I am not in violation since I linking a guide I didn't make, and it is for the sole purpose of trying to help someone, not getting views or votes.

BBCoding turns Lissandra into Lissandra. can't link guides here on comment section but i'll PM you jhoijhoi's guide on BBCoding. o_O

Thanks for your feedback! And thanks for the compliments and suggestions. Like I said this is my first guide ever haha, and I dont know what BB coding is? I will make sure to find out however and hopefully I can someday have a guide that looks amazing like the ones ive seen from you!

Hey there. So first, I want to thank you on having a pretty complete guide. You also have decent explanations to your runes and items, which is ok.

Now first, you have almost no coding whatsoever. The entire guide is a giant wall of text, and people don't want to go through all of that. You need to learn how to use BB codes or get someone else to write the code or help you with it.

Secondly, you need more sections. Item explanations, laning phases, team fights, etc. just more sections. There should be more information on her. You gave a few good sections, but it feels a bit lacking and incomplete. That's about it for now.