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here's your +1 ;)
My tone hurts you? Can't even tell if you're serious. I'll try heal it and make it better for you.
Your introduction seems very boring and it just drags on. As an advanced guide maker, you need your introduction to be exciting, like popping candy in the mouth of a child.
Healing chapter is still there...
Choosing your build is still there...
Jungling section is still unclear and you still recommend to save
In the cheatsheet, you've recommended lots of items that you could take. Explain them in the Item Section.
You should add in a mastery tree. It's visually pleasing.
What are you talking about? Not many people playing
Well, you recommend playing with
So yeah. If you're going to make a guide and put it OUT for review, you'd better be able to accept what's coming in return. Don't whine about how I didn't sugarcoat things or put them on a crystal plate to spoonfeed you.
Goodluck.
Here's your review.
Right from the get go I am NOT interested in reading your guide. The introduction is boring and doesn't interest me. Change it to entice me to read it.
Trundle is most definitely NOT one of the least played champions.
Hecarimjob?
For pros / cons, I would make the - bold, so they stand out more. Same with the +.
Always explain the basics of a champion first, so runes, masteries, summoner spells, etc. Never skills first.
Mastery section is bad. You've put up a picture of an empty mastery tree, fix it so that it runs according to your recommended setup.
You've created an entire chapter for offensive / utility spell, which is a chapter that shouldn't even be there. Remove it please.
"Its like how ADCs always get The Bloodthirster." But ADC's don't always get BT?
Your jungling section is very unclear, and I'm reading it as wrong. You should SAVE
Team mate section is also unclear and inaccurate. You recommend
LOTS of your chapters are unclear and in the wrong order. The "choosing your build" chapter is pointless. Remove it. Healing chapter is pointless and in the wrong spot if you are even going to have it at all. Put it under a spoiler in the building section or under spirit visage as an item.
I also believe you have not re-read this guide or put it through a spell checker. There are incredible amounts of spelling errors and grammatically incorrect sentences. You've crammed a lot of bull**** into your guide to make it look longer, and it's not going to cut it for me.
5 for information, 5 for appearance and 1 for bonus.
You seriously need to reread this guide and pay attention to the amount of stuff you've crammed into it, please.
I appreciate the review, but I do not appreciate the harshness of your tone.
Right off the bat, you say my guide is unappealing, and you're not interested. That doesn't hurt at all.
How many players play
Can't take a little joke?
The pros and cons are easy enough to see.
I reorganized the chapters to be in a "better order" for you.
You discriminating against
Maybe some players don't understand when to build certain items, and need the help.
If your going to rip on someone's guide, the least you could do is be polite about it.
Right from the get go I am NOT interested in reading your guide. The introduction is boring and doesn't interest me. Change it to entice me to read it.
Trundle is most definitely NOT one of the least played champions.
Hecarimjob?
For pros / cons, I would make the - bold, so they stand out more. Same with the +.
Always explain the basics of a champion first, so runes, masteries, summoner spells, etc. Never skills first.
Mastery section is bad. You've put up a picture of an empty mastery tree, fix it so that it runs according to your recommended setup.
You've created an entire chapter for offensive / utility spell, which is a chapter that shouldn't even be there. Remove it please.
"Its like how ADCs always get The Bloodthirster." But ADC's don't always get BT?
Your jungling section is very unclear, and I'm reading it as wrong. You should SAVE
Team mate section is also unclear and inaccurate. You recommend
LOTS of your chapters are unclear and in the wrong order. The "choosing your build" chapter is pointless. Remove it. Healing chapter is pointless and in the wrong spot if you are even going to have it at all. Put it under a spoiler in the building section or under spirit visage as an item.
I also believe you have not re-read this guide or put it through a spell checker. There are incredible amounts of spelling errors and grammatically incorrect sentences. You've crammed a lot of bull**** into your guide to make it look longer, and it's not going to cut it for me.
5 for information, 5 for appearance and 1 for bonus.
You seriously need to reread this guide and pay attention to the amount of stuff you've crammed into it, please.
he brings as much utility as warwick but he can initiate ganks much confidently and securely earlier on
the problem is with his lack of gap closer and mobility, outside his frozen domain, he is not nearly as powerful, he also has to commit in teamfights due to him lacking any range. He may die before his w and e comes back up to disengage once his engages most of the time. building more tanky can improve his chances in survival, which will allow the display of his amazing ability to heal back his health in a very short amount of time
he will have no problems as a duelist but he is extremely vulnerable to 1v2 outside of lane
The first thing I notice is the amount of builds you have on your cheatsheet. This can be overwhelming to the reader. I remember that when I first looked on mobafire for guides and saw one with multiple builds like yours, I had no idea which build was best suited for me, so I just looked for another guide. Not saying that you absolutely have to simplify your guide to just 1 build, but just keep in mind that some of your readers might feel this way.
For the spoilers in the abilities section, you might want to label them "Tips and Tricks" instead of just "click to view".
You have a couple blocks of text (like in the summoner spells section) that are hard to read simply because the paragraph is simply too big. Break it down.
In your items section, you should explain when to get Madred's and when to get Spirit Stone.
You don't have Phantom Dancer in any of your cheatsheets, so why list it as a possible item to get?
Sorry, I have to go, so I have to cut my review short. One last thing I will mention is that you may want to have a laning phase explanation. Also, pictures for how to use Pillar of Ice can be super useful to illustrate how to use it properly for noobies.
Cheers.
1. Dem masteries. Taking
2. Change the "build order" builds to the "start with-> rush" etc.
3. Still using the old Trundle pictures with the skill order
4. Try to minimalize the 1 sentence explanations. I am referring to the masteries btw. Either combine the explanations together to 1 big explanation or explain each mastery a bit more depth (I AM LOOKING AT YOU LEGENDARY ARMOR :O)
Thy blessing
1. Comment to vote
2. Overal builds seem fine
3. Decent structure in cheatsheet
4. All basics included
5. Decent use of structure + coding
Result: Path of the Student
Guide is decent. However I can find 1 sentence explanations here and there. You might want to elaborate a bit more towards the choices you made (even a nooby must understand what and why).
Besides that, you have done all basics and stuff, so it is an okay guide, just needs a little work ;D
Have fun :D
(Do not forget to vote! :D)
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