if you really want to play damage lee sin go top. in the jungle, tank/bruiser is way better. imo ancient golem really is a must and superior to elder lizard in every situation. maybe take sightstone? since you have trinkets now you dont need it that much i suppose but you are still gonna lack wards imo and you can get red trinket instead if you get sightstone. dont like trinity btw, its not that good in lee and it costs ~4000 gold. just my opinon, now vote since i dont want to be flamed xD

Thank You for the feedback. I will consider making changes to this build later. Thank You :)

Don't scatter your quints that much. MS or AD are probably the best ones.

Building that squishy is quite risky. If you are going Spirit of the Elder Lizard you should immediately start building tankiness instead of more damage.

I'd prefer 21/9/0 masteries, and if I went 9/21/0 I wouldn't take Resistance , Perseverance or Second Wind because runic shield (for example]] is much better.

You don't give enough explanations on runes or masteries.

Heal isn't viable, Ghost isn't really worth it, you get the point. Flash & Smite is superior to anything else.

You don't really explain your items either.

Don't put in the ability details which are clearly copied from some kind of wiki, probably lolwiki.

Your jungle route explanations are lacking. Your team should be securing BOTH buffs, and if you start from Ancient Golem there are two reasons for it: 1. It's on your bot side of the map or 2. You are going to gank straight after Elder Lizard.

You don't really explain when to smite and when to not.