Thank you Foxy! I didn't know how to include the icons but now I do! I am still making some making some changes in regards to the build/guide. Thanks for the tips :)

Alright. Normally I would just link you this Guide and this one, but I'll give you some deeper information/suggestions.

• First off, code your guide using the links I just sent you. It will make it all much more readable.
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• Visualize your chapters & information with the help of icons/columns. Go like this:
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  [columns]
  [nextcol]
  [icon=hextech gunblade size=64]
  [nextcol width=30]
  [nextcol]
  INSERT YOUR TEXT HERE
  [/columns]
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  Which becomes:
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  INSERT YOUR TEXT HERE

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• Consider taking greater mark of hybrid penetration. You scale with both AD and AP, plus it helps you to last-hit minions.
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• Take different chapters for everything. Keep Abilities & Summoner Spells separated for isntance.
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• Put your tips in the end, when they finally understand Akali. You first explain everything about her, and give tips afterwards this way.
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• Use a spell checker, or ask someone who's a good English writer to spell check your guide. I believe you're French? (Tonnes of damage -> tons of damage)
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• Add alternative/situational items. You can't build the same every single game. That's not how LoL works.
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• your cheat sheet is fine (mastery choice is alright). You can however add an upgraded trinket in your final build.
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• Explain every item you choose in detail.

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This should be enough for now ^^
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I hope you'll improve your guide soon and make something pretty out of it!
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Let me know if you need any more help.

Best of luck,

Foxy

Wow. THANK YOU FOR THR GREAT TIPS! I should too. (: Thanks for helping!

You have a good start here with this guide. But it needs some work; I feel that you need pictures first off. Is a book more fun to read with pictures or not? having pictures will keep the reader interested and makes them able to understand the build. I feel the tome start you have is good IF you intend to play passive early on. remember that boots and pots start is also a reasonable choice. Akali isn't only a mid laner. Remember that she is also played in the top lane and the main reason for the cloth 5 start is for the top lane AD damage that champs deal early on in the top lane. I did enjoy reading your tips though. And the WARDING tip is very important! don't undersell that. A lot of people don't use wards or forget to use them. I would add why you choose each item and give the stats and the reasons you choose them. BUT HERE IS THE BIGGEST THING! MAKE IT UNIQUE AND SPECIAL TO YOU. Good luck I hope this tip helped