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These are going to be the things that we are going to be looking through ideally with this review.
STRUCTURE: This is basically how you code, place and use code from a tidy and neat viewpoint.
CONSISTENCY: Basically how often you switch things up. Some parts might be a mess and others great.
INCLUDINGS: These are things that could be added like Runes, Items, Matchups or entire sections.
MY CONCERNS: Things that I find not really interesting to apply to a guide or just filler.
Again it's meant to be as straight forward and to the point as possible. You're going to want to add some notes to give your reader a CHEAT SHEET, which you have done, but you missed the runes which could use some love.
It's tidy and neat, but I would tidy up the "Recommended Items" you have enabled as it's listing 8 items rather than 6 at the top.
You're lacking a lot of match-ups in the mid lane for
Like my review for your Gwen guide, you've used the exact same structure which I am familiar with, but I believe you should organize or at the very least, space out the imagery and text a little bit more and perhaps resize some of your images. It's kind of hard to make out the combo in your combo section against AP/SAFE and such.
I would suggest using rule or rule2 code to add a line between the skill order and the text below it to break it apart slightly, or just use spacing to give them some room to breathe.
As you scroll down the guide, the texts and imagery as I stated previously are all the same, really tightly packed together with no spaces and relatively small imagery which is difficult to really focus on.
Be consistent with spacing so things don't blend together, specifically in your rune option section and items.
When you use spoilers, make sure you don't space the first line. It will causes a massive gap when opened.
More detail can definitely be put into the guide for sure. But for now I would highly recommend just tidying up the code, making everything consistent and then looking to see what you want your future guide to look like. ~Cat
I am trying to add notes when and where I can however as I said in threats, most people are just trying to counter pick me which forces me to play the same and similar builds. I will work on getting some notes going for at least
My recommended items are actually my build examples and in that particular set, and every example, it is how I have done my builds in an actual game. I did shorten it to just six items sense I can see how eight might be a little confusion though one of them was an elixir. You are very much correct,
As I said about the runes when locking in Kassadin most of the time I am seeing the same things,
What exactly are you asking me to resize? I am very confused especially sense you do not seem to have a problem with the other ability break down for AD/Aggressive.
I will work on some spacing and tidying up the code. Truth be told I totally forgot I needed to update everything in the Chapter Guides, and I will message you again once that is all fixed up. Thank you for letting me know about the spoiler problem, I had moved the results from within the spoiler to the outside and apparently forgot to fix the extra added lines.
For my
Why you bully me so ; _ ;, I'm just a super responsive / active person.
The other two might be tricky sense it has been a while sense I got a chance to use them.
If you don't have much knowledge / information to back up a rune style then it shouldn't be added in even if you know others are currently running it, you don't know why and that doesn't help anyone out really. That's my opinion on that matter.
My recommended items are actually my build examples.
In this section it's just 8 items. Since it's listed as 8 and not 6 with 2 on the side it gets pushed out into 8 items since it is recommended, you just gotta take off the Book / Potion and add them somewhere else to fix that issue, it's more of a pet peeve than anything else.
That makes it very hard to make threats, I have never played against these champions.
I feel like you should actually play these champions more before trying to make a guide out of them, for example: I only ever play Teemo, 6million Mastery, and while I have general knowledge of the game as a whole and of most champions, I would still screw up most every champion with a complex or just basic combo. You should definitely try to get more games played so you can accurately make the guide as detailed as you can, for just the basic match-ups, like
What exactly are you asking me to resize?
The combo section is too small for me personally, and it's blending with the ability pathing design you have just above it, proper spacing and proper sizing would help fix this. I left the example in the spoiler for you.
For my
Everything is worth updating, that is if you actually care about your guides / how they look and such. I never go more than a few days without updating my guide, there is always something you can do to fix or tidy up a guide.