The build in itself is really good, but the guide... Let's just say you should work on it a bit more so it look more like a guide that show one way of playing Jax. Right now, the only thing i can learn from the guide is the build itself, the structure of the rest is lacking. It may not seem important but a good looking guide make a HUGE difference, so if you have some free time, you should update it bit by bit until it look better.

Isn't it better to take the jungle item?