Oh, how complicated all the things are about making a guide. But one thing is obviously right - you should write at least about mostly hard picks you met at your lane. For exmple, like Vayne - I really really hate Caitlyn, especially when my support doesn't have active CC, like Nunu or Soraka. You should have been mentioned things like this.

And, by the way, there is not obvious for me how to farm by Graves with his lack of mana. It's all about 3 Qs and Es, and you are empty. Or you often lane with Soraka? So, maybe you should talk a little about your favorite support?

That was a little feedback from me about guide content, not decor of it. I hope, I helped you for a bit to make your guide better.

yea and i will copy paste whatever, didn't think it would get such a rage "feedback" of being not complete.

yea i did get feedback from 1 person. ONE, the others were complaining about how unfinished it was, and Lagger, he did after was gone. they didn't give me feedback on the guide, I doubt they even read it. thanks anyways

http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/blog/na-veng-lmfao/my-blog-good-guide-shop

First off, if you are going to do a line, make sure you use a space before/after it. The line just makes it even more messy. Change the "Pros" to "Pros". Also, the underline is like this: wrong should be: right. Thank the lord you mentioned Long Sword + crystaline flask as starting items. So many people not bothering to do that -__- You did [icon-clairvoyance size=18] with a - not an =!, also, you did [clarity] with only 1 bracket, instead of 2 ==> Clarity. Items, runes, masteries, summoner spells & skills are fine. You need to do some work.
PUT A SPACE BEFORE & AFTER YOUR WHITE LINE DIVIDER! Your pros / cons layout looks messy. I'd suggest messing around to get an epic one. Go to my Udyr guide & check mine out, I reckon it looks pretty clean and epic. 2 sections you MUST have as an ADC guide is: Enemy ADC matchup's & Friendly Support matchup's. Adding in these 2 sections GREATLY increase the knowledge of how to win a lane as Graves. You should definitely have a section on "other viable ITEMS", eg ==> Banshee's Veil. Also, just saw this. Under the summoner spells section, you say Heal icon=heal. I would do this code: Anyway. You've scored a 6.5 from me, which is JUST an upvote. Please take some of my advice.

Sir, you ARE getting feedback. They downvoted because it wasn't complete.

While we're talking about people not reading stuff, did you read that link sirell posted? I wrote that guide btw.

Do not publish an incomplete guide. The reason is because it will drop further and further down the new guides list while you are finishing it up. That is just disadvantageous to you.

I suggest you republish. Archive this, start a new one and copy-paste the old one into the new. And please hold off on the publish button til it's complete.

O.o? My guide?

It says this on my guide as the first comment:



I don't know what the **** you're looking at (you shouldn't even be able to see my archived guide anyway).

If this is 3/4, I dread to see the final product. Hey, I didn't say it 'sucked ****' because it's unfinished, I'm just telling you to finish it first and then publish it. Don't make pointless (and wrong) assumptions, I said.

And hitting the 'publish' button is handing it in. You have deemed it ready to be judged by the wider community. And since it is not finished, why should it be received well?

So here's the 'teacher's feedback'. Finish the damn thing first. And then publish it.

Also, if you need feedback on how to write a guide because you're scared of mistakes, then you are clearly not qualified to write a guide. In order to write a guide on that champion, you should know them inside and out. You should be able to read through your own work and notice critical mistakes. A few blips here and there might be OK, but nothing so serious that you ask the wider community to correct you for you.

And like I said, finish your guide then ask me to come back and re-evaluate my vote.

@devdevil excuse me lol? I wasn't raging, I was pointing out facts, and seriously, i don't want to argue.

I just looked at your guide and the first comment was that, and why are you having such a big reaction, i didn't come here to argue.

And no, 1/4 Finished? hahha more like 3/4, and no i'm not handing it in, I already explained this, I wanted initial feedback so i didn't go too deep into the guide making the same mistakes. Its like a student asking the teacher for feedback when he is 3/4 done, and teacher is screaming at him for sucking **** because it's not finished...

If you really want feedback, just force people to comment to vote, and don't jump to such outrageous conclusions.

And rage less.

Um... no, I didn't have it done to me? I released a completed guide. It's now archived pending S3 changes. Don't make pointless (and wrong) assumptions.

And the reason you released it whilst it was incomplete is irrelevant. What matters is that you released the guide and it was substantially unfinished. Hence, downvote.

It's like a student handing in an assignment 1/4 finished and then wondering why it's getting such a negative reaction.

@invite him, thank you for you feedback will continue to improve :D