The only chance I would make is to get a Doran's instead of the scepter.... I actually groan whenever I see a partner with a scepter as their first item. Honestly, the lifesteal from the Doran's will be enough and the extra hps and damage are far more worth it than the lifesteal. Honestly you shouldn't be attacking that much with him anyways, you should be last hitting and dodging in and out with yellow card to harass. Also, if you say this is a waste later on, just sell it and replace it with your vamp scepter to get the bloodthirster later. Honestly a just all around smarter choice.

Also i added some strategy and play style tips at the end of my description, you should check it.

@ Atsorf: Yes having 100% crit chance means that every attack will be a critical strike

And in response to the SWOTD, idk, i've thought about it before, and it would be nice if i were taking down a dodge tank like jax or malphite. But the problem is, idk how to align stacked deck and SWOTD's effect. It seems like they would always activate at different times. But the the Phantom dancer is not just about damage output, its also about move speed and dodge. The move speed makes it very easy to avoid damage from burst assassins and the dodge makes you pretty much invulnerable to physical attack

I like the setup and the crit chance is very nice. Being able to deal 250% dmg plus 25% life steal can drastically matter. Going for those few items early on does seem like a good way to do it. I am curious as to how you stack up against an enemy with high hp. I know madred's blood razor came in handy while partying with my friends who are higher level then me so I was face with stronger opponents. I am not certain how well it would level out if I just solo without madred's. My main curiosity is that you have over 100% crit chance, some games that doesn't mean every attack is going to crit. Does having that kind of percentage mean you will be dealing crits every hit? If so that is quite nice. I do agree that perhaps instead of a second phantom dancer a SWOTD would be a god option. Since TF already has a passive ability of dealing extra dmg every 4th hit, you can stack up to 3, activate the sword and gate in for a fourth attack and really just rampage on someone. I haven't gotten that much strategically down to stack my cards that well but its definatley something to work on.

Hey thanks for the comment, i like your build! really i think it all depends on the other champs you are playing with. Im not sure why you chose the dodge % runes though (a question not an insult). And hey scrubs gotta start somewhere right.

Nicely done, i like how you colored in some words makes it easier to read. Crit is good for sure, But when i play ad i focus on how much dmg can i do in one gold card stun. perhaps instead of the second phantom dancer, you should get a SOTD, that would cover your attack speed and give you the extra 100 dmg every now and again. maximize dps so to speak. But your right, this build is pretty rage, tf crits hards. His old passive used to be a global crit chance increase, remember that?