Too be honest, i don't really feel like doing much with this build anymore, it was fun to start with now its pretty boring. Besides It's summer time so i really do not wanna sit inside and write things about what to do in a videogame, and the times i do stay inside i would rather play with friends and kick butt as Olaf instead of teaching people how to play Olaf. Also i really dont care about the ratings, this build gets. I just wanted to show my persepective and build for Olaf.
So im sorry but im not gonna do anything more with this build. Again i really do not care about the ratings as long as i have fun playing this game and playing as Olaf.
Still thanks for the feedback and response to this build.

Hope you have a nice summer :)

You stated you'd improve aesthetics but I still very little progress. What happened?

Well, my opinion on having a lot of armor pen, is that he can lifesteal and damage tanks very easily. Besides late game 340 true damage, isn't that much. So yeah, i will not take away the armor pen since it really does work awesomely ;)

As for the looks of the guide, FOR THE LAST TIME I SAY i will improve it, just be patient :D

Your masteries are ****! You do not need so much ArPen, as you have true damage. You have 0 critical strike chance, yet you get critical strike damage? Lifesteal is no problem, you got Tough It Out. Go 9/21/0 masteries, it is a lot better.

Better BBCoding please!
Try that! Also, I did not read the whole guide, just a quick skim.

'Aesthetic appeal' is a huge part of a guide, and although for anyone new, it might be a huge hassle, it's really necessary to get that distinction from a subpar guide and a 'wow, looks great' guide.

Thanks a lot! I should really make a section purely about item's, and explaining witch items you should buy given who on the enemy team is fed.

Well, there's a guide for that. You should probably make a real items section and explain the core items you always get there, and the items you get depending on the circumstances, for example, Maw/FoN/Wit's End if you are having problems with magical damage, or some armor items if you are having problems with physical damage. But otherwise, the core of the guide is really good.

It seems, people would like me to make my guide look good. The main problem has been that i am not sure exactly how i get pictures into my build. As for buying Magic Resist, i haven't really bothered to buy it, even though it is probably very foolish of me. Main reason is that i normally manage to catch up to ranged AP caster and kill them before they have a really good reason to burst me down.
But i will try out Wits End. The attack speed gained from Wits End, is going to be insane with his passive.
Thanks for all of the feedback and constructive criticism.
I'll try to take what you say into consideration, even though i really don't care that much about ''how pretty'' my guide looks :P
Ill still try to add some more pictures pictures.

Well thought out, and on account of all these comments on making it look fancy, it works and not everything needs to be visually appeasing. Well done mate!

It's decent! But there are a few problems.

1. BBC coding is a bit messy, and unorganized. Could do a lot better, especially with pictures and such. Look up some other guides, or ask around. The icons can be made by [ icon=_______ size=___]
2. Your items. You have near to 0 MR, which makes you vulnerable to AP. I'd pull your bloodthirster last or later and get a Maw/FoN/Wit's End into your item build. You can always add BT to replace Wriggles late game.
3. You don't explain your items at all.
4. You put laning and strategies in front of runes and summoner spells, and so on. They should usually be in the early parts of the guide.
5. For the jungling portion, you want to add more pictures and possibly videos.
6. Your pro/con list is very subpar and is clearly biased towards 'pros'.
7. You can add more sections relative to tips, to warding, and so on.

Good effort and information, I'd like to see more 'uniqueness', something that sets this apart from other guides. Otherwise, good job! I'll give you a +1 for now, but if there is no change, I'm afraid I'll have to change it to a -1. ^^

I recommend adding more pictures, as right now its just walls of text. Also, Ghost works magic with ragnarock, so you might wanna change that in your cheat sheet.

Thanks for the reply! I will take your item purchase order into consideration and definitely try it out. I will also try to make the guide look better, i just haven't had the proper time for it.
Thank you again for feedback!