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Hey v0ltage38.
You requested a review of your guide on the official discussion post and so here we are. You mentioned that it is a work in progress and I can definitely see that, considering there isn't a whole lot here at the moment. You also mentioned that you would like your guide to be a bit more in-depth, well to get to this point you need to offer up a bit more information as to how to play Ryze, build diversity, roles, rotations, general things that would teach the reader exactly what they should be doing.

First and foremost

You'll need to figure out what exactly you're trying to go for with the guide, something basic, something advanced both visually and informatively? You can check my Guide for example as a reference to depth. If you do intend to eventually get to this point of depth and detail, it'll be a long time coming, since it takes quite a lot of understanding of coding & structure.

Cheat Sheet

You have a pretty decent section devoted to giving basic information about each enemy encounter during the mid lane phase with your threats section. That's good to see, often times we have a lot of users simply have this portion empty with no real helpful tips to dealing with that lane. It's detailed and helpful, though you might be able to add in some synergies if you know of any champions that can really help him in any way if there are any specific things that he or they can do for each other.

Guide Body

In the current state that your guide is in, you have the base foundation which in this case would be the cheat sheet and threat information, but a severe lack of a base body which would be more informative to the reader and sections dedicated to explaining things in much more detail, especially with tables and other basic, basic forms of code outside of just text.

Not trying to sound like a bully, I often times do come off as someone that sounds condescending or mean, I'm just a blunt and honest person with no real regard to how I word certain things. You have a decent guide, it wouldn't win any contests as first place or anything like that, but you can definitely put more work into it by reading other guides (champions) and seeing what everyone else has done to bring theirs to life and use that to build yours. We love creativity.

Hope to see some changes in the future, and if you ever need a re-review you can also contact us.
~Cat