It's a jungle guide sir. I'm sure you already knew that and were just trying to be smart/funny in whatever way you were attempting to do so by. But if you actually didn't know it was a jungle guide, I don't know what I'll do with my life.

I don't know why you took smite. So I left.

There are a few things that can improve in this guide, including the build :P

What is missing?
- Coding, your guide is now very boring to read
- Structure, it is all blocks and blocks of text instead of different paragraphs
- Summoner spell alternatives, there must be other good summoner spells for jungle Jax no? :D
- Ability explanation, because people like to have their spells explained

What could be better?
* Your skill order, I have no idea why you wouldn't max leap second.
* Chapter order, it should change to this order:
1. Introduction
2. Pros and cons
3. Abilities
4. Summoner spells
5. Runes
6. Masteries
7. Items
8. Creeping/Jungling
9. Summary

There is really a lot that needs to improve, and these are just the first steps :P

Work on it asap so the next readers might have something enjoyable to read :P

Good luck!
-Meiyjhe

I'm going to make this easier for you. Lots of readers who see a guide without coding who comment will just say it has no coding. When I started off, that did't help. Click here to learn how to html and bbc code.

Guess what readers never care about ever..

There are a few things you should change to make it a decent guide.
- Some coding, some pictures, some banners. Make it an attractive guide to read. This is just text which isn't enjoyable.
- Some numerical evidence for your items: Why do you go for Cloth5 instead of Machete5? The last time I checked almost every jungler benefits more from the Machete (the only jungler i could think of where it might work is Malph. And why bother with the armor if you are dodging all the damage for a small amount of time. I'm not going to do it for you but i can almost guarantee that machete5 gives you a faster jungle (maybe a little less healthy but still worth it).
- Change the place where Pros / Cons is. Do you really think it's a good idea to place it halfway through?

One last thing. Is it really necessary to make a jungle Jax guide? The last time I checked the 4 top guides all have a Jungle section (from which some are more detailed than yours).