So, here is where I'm going to come in and tell you what you did wrong and why, and provide a better explanation. Now Laggermeister and Janitsu go and rate guides all day, and guides like this for them are a little too hard to explain everything thats wrong.

First off, you need to add more explanations to EVERYTHING. One sentence for every skill is just not enough. You need to explain, in-depth, why everything is there and what purpose it serves. This goes for Runes, items, skills, masteries, everything.

Second, you have to have better coding. This means better layout, formatting, etc. Tip: Lay off of colors, especially bright ones. Looking at your abilities make my eyes hurt, and i cant stand it, and others can't as well.

Third,, you got my hopes up when you put in a custom banner for your Summoner Spells, but I got sad when i saw thats the only one you put in. It doesn't take too much time to do that for all of your sections. You need more pictures and aesthetically pleasing things so that it,s more enjoyable to read and look at.

What you need to do is look at some of the more viewed guides/top rated guides for any champion and see why they are like that. They have lots of in-depth information, and are pleasing to read and look at. Do this, make changes, and add a change log for those changes.