AD Twisted Fate just doesn't have the punch line it used to. Let's see then.

-Guide is bland, just words, and it'd be an injustice to call it a wall of text since it's only a paragraph each section.

-Boot enchantments? You're not really suggesting anything, just throwing all the enchantments out there.

-No Q until level 10? Obviously you're not clear on whatever the hell it is you're doing.

-Masteries are icky, why Vampirism and Quints for Lifesteal? Totally not worth the sacrifice.

-It's bad to post a guide when you're still in Silver and even worse if it's a work in progress.

Need I say more? Clearly I can tell you're no pro.

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Thanks for my only constructive comment so far.. I'll try and amend most of the basic flaws quickly.
I decided on Statikk Shiv & Phantom Dancer to get both the attack speed and crit chance I was looking for without including Sword of the Divine (see I'm learning about BBCoding already)

Your title is a succinct summary of the guide's quality. Good job.

"Work in progress"
"1st B/2nd Death "
I hope you mean back.

I've told people, ad tf doesnt work. -1.

1. Turn on C2V
2. AD Twisted Fate isn't even good because of his lacks of Range, Ad scaling etc.
3. I don't agree with the item build, Statikk Shiv + Phantom Dancer at once isn't that good ...
4. It has low BBCoding (at least there is)
5. The skill sequence ..... Lagger will kill you if he looks at this guide ..
6. Guude is short
7. Some chapters are missing (nearly all)
Conclusion: Work on it!!! Hard!